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LOC: China
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one concentrated effort doing nothing
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There are no words no more There is no pain no more There is no longing nor passion No more, but why Is it getting worse day By day. Fading like the rays of the Sun, in the smoggy clouds Of this ghastly city. Can see them walking In straight lines North south- east west And back Noon highlight-lunch Sichuan hotpot Shopping sessions Arguing about high price Bad quality. Behind all Your image Resting in your lap No pain No agony Calm and quiet Exept our tears Warm, rinsing out The dirt From ...
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I like the story, some kind of modern vampire story. I am not sure, whether some of the very casual expressions, "monkey business" are good for the setting. Maybe should unify the writing style, chose one way of writing and keep with it. But I got more and more caught by the story and hope to read more. Overall I like how the story unfolds. So, go ahead, I am hungry for more. Cheers
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