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LOC: Fayetteville, NC
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Eagerly searching for something that could not be found, Yet it still existed in my heart. Pondering for the key to unlock the door From the absence between your heart and mine. Hoping and praying the thought still existed in yours. Between the tears my heart was yearning and aching to cry, My soul could speak no words. Do you still feel the absence?
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It captivates you and makes you want ot read more. Some people dont know what it is like over in Iraq, some people dont care but this peom shows the support that people should give. It was good. ^^
i can relate to this poem. It clearly tells of wanting a realtionship that lasts and i think that will attract an audience. I enjoyed reading, and im sure that others will too.
Cute. I enjoyed reading this not only becasue it is a good peom but becasue it lifts spirits. This is a spunky well worded piece of art.
This was good but a bit confusing. I liked how you said the last line, but the rest of the poem was as i said, just a bit confusing. Overall i enjoyed reading it.
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