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AGE:
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LOC: South Padre Island, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 17
LOC: South Padre Island, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 17
sometimes it is all about a sounding board, nothing more. bouncing off to see if anyone can catch the frequency, kenneth.
sometimes it is a product of listening to some music, some perspective I got doing particularly nothing, or just doing my thing.
The Goals thing by the way. I wanted to mention this: I dont know how to use that feature and it keeps hitting “Best Poetry On Urbis” that is not my goal at all.And I dont know how to undo the feature. I just feel like writing. So I do. thats about it.
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there is no free mental health care for the impoverished intellectual, heart sick, bone weary, and tired. broke, from a broken back of hard emotional labor, they wont take you without insurance or out of pocket fees. and insurance wont take you because it is a "pre-existing condition" and/or dont cover "mental or emotional problems." i am weary of talking; no one knows what to say. i am tired of having horrible days, and having someone expect me to be cheerful and make dinner because they are...
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rumi said something that struck me the other day. something about when his poetry is not being poured forth, unplanned, he is silent. my paraphrasing is terrible. but today is an eternal day unplanned, pouring forth, just like that. and silent. there is nothing better to do than write. i wonder if someone is going to technically review this, and try to tell me how it can be made better, how it could be better communicated. i am stubborn, and i could care less. because this is not a technical ...
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I realize now I dont want things to change. Even though I want more than anything for everything to be different. One is going to happen. The other is not. I think Change is going to win out, and I dont know how I feel about that. I dont think it is because I am lazy, some therapist might call it depressed, I really dont care what you call it, but it feels like although everything is changing nothing can change. Nothing will change. But yet, my logic tells me that is not true. I guess they ar...
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Do you know what Goddess? I don’t care for your sentiment. I do not care what sounds like rants, Or what sounds good, Or what sounds acceptable according to “standard” nature- I do not care. And I know you care not either, As Tears run down, And breath stinks like cigarettes and Boogers, And all manner of gross things that Spring out from your closet. You know. And why do I even love a man who does not love me back. I ask this because my heart hurts and I am tired of crying- But under it all ...
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its sunday. Ray is counting on me to hook up the cable so we can watch football... or so he says. I do not know how to hook up illegal cable and i could just learn if I felt like it, but the heat of the Sun and the stinging ants and snakes in the field keep me from going outside and doing so. Its sunday, and I know most of my friends are just lazing around, unless they are church goers, then they might be out to lunch... (oh they are always "out to lunch".) I want to do something. Some thing....
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well you said it quite well and crap is not as crass as shit? lol. and the whole point is fuck you. but i did like the use of ostentatious, and Utilitarianism. i agree on the must there always be a goal? and i like that you are trying to build up a tolerance for reviews. ha ha. good luck!
I sighed deeply after reading this. i think, from a technical standpoint, that this is a very descriptive piece that does all the necessary things to draw a reader in. now enough of that. i hate to technically review because i am not technical. the story was beautiful, and as a woman, i can relate so...to the feeling of being a kitten nestled into his chest, the wanton feeling for someone so unattainable. And they are, for the are in fact a gift of Neptune.And would we feel the same way about...
This kind of writing I relate very much too, and not to mention the subject matter. the way you write is very free form thought...it seems you just write as it comes to you, as if you are talking to yourself...but ultimately to anyone who happens to hear... i am not a very good reviewer i tell people, because i cant give technical advice. but i can tell when writes breathe honesty, and admittance looks like some form of courage in my eyes... good luck, keep writing...
maybe people fear the unknown. and everyone reacts to it. i have never seen anyone die, a watched my cat die when he was put to sleep, but i never heard someone's last breath. i know we all do it. we all die someday. and somehow i guess that is okay because we are all born too, somehow, and we make it through that. sorry i am not much of a reviewer. i only seem to know how to respond conversationally on the piece. i am no technical reviewer. just do this, KEEP WRITING!!
you paint a picture of a street corner. although when i see it in my mind, it is all dark and damp and dank. like musty. sometimes the blues is like that, mingled with smoke. i liked the Langston reference. i clicked this randomly and i am pretty glad i did. you definitely have something to say. that i like hearing. so bravo to you. and keep writing!
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