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AGE: 19
LOC: Sutter, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 10

im not going to lie, a lot of personal problems ended up as written pieces. if you dont have the patience to read them, then dont. uh, if you have a myspace mine’s www.myspace.com/weed_of_eden

well, im 18 and i just graduated highschool. im not normal if you couldnt tell. my problems range from have ghostly encounters when they wanted me to solve their problems to mental disorders and people all around judging my suspicious behavoir.

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Lyrics / Heart's Illusion
Version 4
3 Reviews   2 Comments
I want to stop when my eye catches you Why is this the one thing I cannot do The emotion flies I lay at home freezing in my bed sheets I'll kneel in my heart begging on my knees After all my tries (chorus) my heart doesnt want to say goodbye I search and find your eye's rejection I just wish I was the reflection I look out to the black collapsing sky while it's warmer out there than inside will you ever be mine or out of my mind I count another day another fail another heartbreak and another ...
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Criticism / 5 is good?
Version 1
1 Review   2 Comments
Okay, I think it's important that the reviewers of this site have common sense. This who rating system is not that complicated, 1-10, where do people go wrong in rating things? Not sure what I'm talking about? I'm hoping I'm not the only one who's experienced this twisted form of playing with my enjoyment in spending credits. Well, I look at my items that have new revies. Yay! New review! Hm, they lowered the rating, oh well, they must have some good criticism! I mean, they lowered my piece f...
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Lyrics / OMG!
Version 2
0 Reviews   0 Comments
You're a prep that plays D&D and you're a cool guy wanna be Lie lie lie your way to the top You're doing so well bragging amongst outcasts Bitch please The things you've "done" with these girls no Feed off your lies embedded in lactose Fool yourself in illusion and relax You've got your stories to make-up and sieze and live out your fate encrypted in grease Make up how you cheat the GF oh noes oh em jee that's enough Pick on the emos so much fun Brag brag your way to the middle You know you a...
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Lyrics / Flammable Ice
Version 2
3 Reviews   2 Comments
I get snappy and destroy no one thaws it but i burn it burn the fuel of fantasy life won't go on 'til i forget chorus: Anything (Anything) to give anger an excuse Anything (Anything) to light this ice of a fuse I'd rather (I'd rather) burn off every little part it's better (it's better) than your frost bites on my heart cut the cord of love's support pull the plug before it's too late sometimes i wish that i could as she holds his hand and walks away chorus: Anything to give anger an excuse A...
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Version 5
5 Reviews   5 Comments
I know why you're calling but since when did you get back? Oh you've got all your ways around SI writer's block My heart pounds me down when you rush yourself straight to the blade My nerves jolt me aside whenever that blowtorch is in your hand Bitch at me how it's all your fault Yell and enrage 'til you get your wish Everyone gets one chance but we gave you two Cast out the millionth and we're still here You live and love to break you You die and hate to cure you You've got it, you've lost i...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / URBIS Matters of the heart
hm a poem. um, i can't say i disagree, i see people go "well you can't see the good part of what i've written" when i could've sworn critquing was about pointing out the bad more so than what's good. i wish steve and his sister wouldn't grant refunds for actual criticism that doesn't have whipped cream on top. i'd like to see a "i'm sorry, but if you suck, that's just the truth that you can't hide regardless of reviews you refund" or something discussing that. i'm not sure if i'm mistaken but...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / .
putting this into a poem or as song lyrics? it can either be something purely sexual, or love that is lacking affection of some sort. either way i feel i can relate. gave_you_a_one_since_you_said_you_weren't_trying_for_anything_the_underscore_is_so_i_dont_take_more_credits.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / What is normal?
subjective terms will always lead to said contradictions and oddities when observing examples all over the spectrum. what you're asking is talked about a lot (from conversations i've had at least). hell, if you want to widen your audience question religious prayer as talking to beings the prayeree can't see but still talks to as something that's normal but the same as what carl jung did.
Lyrics / :*(onfusion
I'll start off with what I found to be bad. There was a lot of cliche-rhyming. Rhyming is nice, but when you rhyme for the sake of rhyming, you lose a lot of everything else. the first 8 lines, though they did rhyme a lot, were actually a strong start. but i didn't really see a continuing form. example, the eight lines following the third stanza seem out of place. "Good and evil in me duels" even though this was arranged in an awkward form to keep the rhyme, it still fails to follow what this...
hm, it was kind of funny at first. sort of lost its touch at the end. i can't think of any whitty remarks for batman taking over. perhaps if you had some sort of emphasis of how crazy your son was for superman then brought attention to the sudden change and equal craze for batman perhaps? it went from interesting to plain though. 7/10