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AGE: 19
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 27

Hello there.
I have no idea when I first started writing, I guess it has always been there for me, as a use of relaxation and real creativity. Now, it has turned into many of my obsessions.
I am studying the subjects of A-Level English Literature, Drama, Media and Art.

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Stage Play / Haunted (Planning)
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Haunted (Planning) A Play by Romilly Edwards Characters The Ghosts/Sprits: The Caretaker Betsy Jezzabell Pennywise Mr Tassel Eleanor Abe The Humans: Becky Noah The Dance (At the beginning) Ever since I saw Wade Robson’s zombie dance I can’t get this idea out of my head, to introduce the play I would have the Caretaker leading the audience into the auditorium which would consist of Noah and Becky. The other actors would be on the stage in exaggerated poses very still as the audience would file...
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Short Story / The Moment.
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He’s here. Watching. Tapping the front of his boot on the table, his hands interlocking with one another and resting them delicately on the table. I keep my eye low, staring blankly into the book on my lap, acting as if it was very interesting, though I am not taking a word in at all. From the corner of my eye I see he is just staring, that mysterious and wantful look of his. He scratches the black long hair on his head the way it had been beautifully plaited by the valets. I hear noises, fo...
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Short Story / Alice.
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Alice (A Monologue) By Romilly Edwards Hi my name is Alice, you’re probably thinking why is she talking to us with those filthy asylum clothes on. Well listen it starts probably after I was born into this weird world. I knew I was different from other people, at boarding school the girls would taunt me. Your ugly! Your selfish! Your pathetic! But I had no idea why they were doing it, and why I was sent there. Until…until she told me. Even at primary school I had no friends, but then one day a...
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Poetry / RED RIVER
I liked this poem, espescially the structure of how you have set it out, like you are producing a shape with your words-using visual imagery. Very creative and clever way to structure out a poem. What I think about this poem is that you should go back and look through it. The red violin in this poem is the person's obsession right? I think you should be more imaginative about how you talk about the violin cause you use the word, 'addiction.' Tell/show the audience/reader in alot more detail h...
I would like to commend to start with, as I enjoy work that has been inspired by real events or people. This poem had an emotional status as I read through it verse after verse. I particulary liked the ending, having the ellipsis created you could say suspense for the reader, but to me it was perfect. Keep up the great work, You have great potential-it needs alot of hard work, Keep writing!
Poetry / Our time
I'm not very good with poetry either, but this piece I really liked. My imagination is abit wild, and when I read I had a voice in my head saying the words, this would be a good start/verse for a song. :) I liked the rhythm flow of the poem as I read it, but it sort of stumped me when it came to finish on 'Strife.' I believe that you could have used a stronger word to finish it off. Also intensifying the storytellers' emotions as the poem builds up. Keep up with the great work, I believe you ...
Stage Play / shadow&widow
I feel that this piece is un-finished and needs to be looked at more in detail. There is an isolated/dark feeling in this say if it was performed in darkly lit room creating a psychotic/scary atompshere which is always big with public, especially myself, I adore dark plays. There was a great flow, but it was suddenly broken. I enjoyed the intensity you made of the Shadow character who questioning the Widow character, something like that would make the audience get nervous and hanging onto the...
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