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AGE: 29
LOC: Spartanburg, SC
GEN: Male
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / It was better then
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The rough brick wall scratches him slightly through his pale blue scrubs. He grimaces and squints at the bright sunlight from his usual shady spot near the side door. As his two o'clock appointment strolls leisurely towards, he wonders why management asked him to interview this prospective hire. The kid barely looks old enough to be out of diapers. "Allen Winston I presume?" he asks as the young man nears the corner of the sidewalk. "Yeah. Who's asking?" The youngster replies, looking uncomf...
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I really like your imagery. "One cement colossus storms down" makes me imagine a giant crashing to the ground after being dealt a fatal blow. The ending stanza wraps things up in a bittersweet way.
Lyrics / Sonny Boy Blues
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