Cute use of celebrity names and tie ins, but outside of that, there's no cohesive evidence that each passage goes together. Transitions are non-existent and make it difficult to figure out exactly what the author is getting at (which I still can't figure out). Though I do have to say that it's clever.

The only thing that I can't quite get a grasp on is why the words were honey and then savored, yet then the subject dies inside... Bittersweet? Maybe, but overall I like the visuals...

Great visuals. I really like how you set the scene up and constantly keep us updated on what your thoughts and sights are. I really liked it. There's a hint of a climax that leaves me wanting more... I like the ending.