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AGE:
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LOC: Leesburg, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 25
LOC: Leesburg, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 25
I am a 39 year-old writer, currently residing in Northern Virginia, just outside of Washington, D.C. Having competed successfully in several writing competitions, I’m now working to pull myself out of the amateur ranks and into the professional field. It’s not all about money, though; it’s more about getting my work broadcast and sharing what’s been crowding my head for years. I am paying the bills by working in a job that, while providing a good source of income, is not exactly what you would call a creative outlet. That’s why I spend as much of my spare time as possible sculpting stories.
I have been writing for quite some time now, and I have dabbled in all sorts of sticky, literary things. I have tried on more styles and more genr…
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I am David Niven- sharp, selective with my quips. I am Peter Sellers- inept, bumbling my way through life. I am a well-oiled engine- purring just a fraction above the threshold of human hearing. I am a creaking hinge- the sound that grates and betrays in the night. I am a wide-eyed child- full of the joy for the unknown, the mysterious. I am a cataract-riddled old man- blind to everything but myopic memory. I am a virile man- aggression in skin. I am a vanquished woman- impaled by things not ...
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I am David Niven- sharp, selective with my quips. I am Peter Sellers- inept, bumbling my way through life. I am a well-oiled engine- purring just a fraction above the threshold of human hearing. I am a creaking hinge- the sound that grates and betrays in the night. I am a wide-eyed child- full of the joy for the unknown, the mysterious. I am a cataract-riddled old man- blind to everything but myopic memory. I am a virile man- aggression in skin. I am a vanquished woman- impaled by things not ...
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Rain and Rust 1. The train finally pulls into the station. I look at my watch, absently, though I don't really need to- I've been looking down at it every three minutes for the past hour. Yep, three-twenty. Fifteen minutes late. Fifteen minutes of lost shoe leather. And a lost chance, the last chance to make things right with her. She told me that I had to be at the station by three, that she wasn't going to wait. She'd said that she was tired of waiting. Said that she had spent the past four...
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Three meals a day. That's all I allow myself. No in-between snacks, no sneaking clandestine bites. I eat them on a schedule, generally. Just three meals a day. And when I pick out my meals, I normally go for something a hair less than filling. I take the leaner cuts, the seasoned stuff, the parts that will make me both a polite diner and a relatively thin man. It's better to remain unseen, unremembered in the paranoid and unpredictable world. The wrong kind of people will ask only the right ...
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I was met by something new today as I crested the last hill, making for the far reaches of the forever green acres. For weeks, as I’ve been gathering material for a vast book project, I have come every day, arriving near dawn as soon as the doors have been opened by unseen custodians, staying until the chorus of the crickets have been overwhelmed by the stuttering squeals of rusting hinges. I walk among stones and walls, looking for the beauty among the tableaus of lost memories and broken h...
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Wow! What a great deal of intensity you have packed into those syllables! I would dearly love to know what prompted the creation of this piece as it surely would make for one hell of a short story. But of course I will leave that to you, if you are of that bent. The structure was crisp and the imagery powerful. Excellent, excellent work. Thank you for this one.
The metrics prevented me from giving this one a perfect rating. Villanelles, while rustic and unsophisticated in nature, do possess a cadence. Your piece has a cadence, but it has, in spots, a halting, less lyrical feel to it. That is what makes a villanelle- a lyrical feel. Try revising the piece to give it the simple sing-song feel that is the benchmark for this styling. Other than the cadence, however, the work is nice, fluid, and structured true to the format. Thanks for the poem. Peace.
I am not sure of the story that compelled the creation of this piece, but I am positive that you have captured the raw emotion that leaks, no, pours from it. Abuse, in any form, is a travesty, and so many women are powerless against its impact upon them and their loved ones. It is more so tragic, when the unwitting victims are children. Being a parent and the product of an abusive parentage, I can honestly say that this piece reached inside me and touched the very core of my being. It is beau...
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