I like it. It is brimming with optimism and could work as a slogan.

The language is beautiful, but it doesn't really tell a story. There isn't a sense of past present and future. But then there isn't a whole lot we can do in 6 words.

I like it. It it has a plot, conflict, and resolution, so it fits the criteria of being a short story which is hard to do in just 6 words.

Nice. It has that ring of truth and a past, present, and future. All in six words.

I like it. It is honest and made me laugh. I'm not sure it tells a story though. But then what can you do in 6 words?

Excellent. That pretty much says it all.