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LAST LOGIN: July 23
LAST LOGIN: July 23
Greetings! My name is Bekah. I generally write poetry, but try my hand at story creation occasionally, usually never finishing a story, unless it is short or if I get manic about it.
For the most part, my work is dark, paticularly my prose. My poetry is more varied. Sometimes dark, sometimes whining about love, sometimes they have a buried pun or statement about society.
I am a Wiccan, and most times my poetry and prose reflect this.
Enjoy my work!
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This desire runs through me Reigns inside my head Pulses in my blood I cannot control it anymore To see the pain in their eyes But not feel it myself To see blood pour from skin Yet not borne of my heart This, for me, is my playground My home, my secret place They shall never find it Hidden ‘neath the bowels of my city *** The city changes Skycrapers to villas Victorian to simple adobe Changes with my every whim The people within are my limbs Fingers, toes and eyes Surround my every moment Ch...
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Very interesting read. I like the mood of the story, very descriptive, especially the alley and the fear-mixed-with-fearlessness of the main character. There were a few run-on sentences in the first couple of paragraphs, but nothing too bad. The only phrasing I felt was off enough to stop and wonder about was " she spat out her hand digging into her purse for her pepper spray. " Perhaps you meant "shot"? Overall, though, the story is excellent. I look forward to reading more!
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