vanessa_rjc23's profile
AGE:
22
LOC: Hayward, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 12
LOC: Hayward, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 12
name: vanessa
age: 21
sign: aquarius
pob: alameda, ca
@now: manama, bahrain
pole: lefty
job: U.S. Navy
rate: master-at-arms
since: jan. 24, 2005
i do: writing, photography, big guns
goals: finish college- cop? journalist?
color: black
foods: U.S., mexican, asian, italian
music: lyrical/meaningful; danceable
ilike: eminem, mike shinoda, my cousins
poets: edgar allan poe, 2pac, my cousin
movie: the italian job, shreks
actor: john leguzamo
‘tres: ashley judd
car: mustang (dream not reality)
soul:
i am a child of the sea, and i’m a child of the sun. (came to me in a dream.)
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It’s more than casting spells, it’s never hexing and curses. It’s not saving your worship for prayer and in churches, but realizing how you live your life is your worship. It’s recognizing the powers that surround you and coursing within you; and knowing where it manifests from. It’s knowing that by that source, we (everything in existence), are connected. It’s seeing more than meets the eye. It’s entering the Darkness of Mystery without fear in your heart, but with Perfect Love and Perfect T...
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who tells people poetry has to rhyme? it's nice, and sounds good, and can be fun, but sometimes it makes the writing sound forced. i don't force anything. what comes out comes out. i like near-rhymes, i like rhymes that aren't obvious. not many people seem to get the concept of a near-rhyme or just going by sounds. i think that's lame. while rhyming can bring a unique challenge to a writer while creating their peice, sometimes it's a question of, write what i really want to say, write somethi...
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chorus: Just for fun has left me empty the great loves i’ve had will never leave me took some time in the game to show me without real love passion is sure to die verses: it started out carefree just a natural attraction with a simple look we know where we’re heading… behind closed doors the night releases our tension and in the warmth as we cuddle loneliness is guised the sun comes up and the passion passes you take your next hook-ups and i take mine like we’re only alive to relive that feel...
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Ignorance is Bliss. Bliss is The Garden of Eden. Knowledge is Power. By the fruit of the tree, Eve became empowered. “And The Serpent said unto the woman, ye shall not surely die: for God doth know that in the day ye eat thereof, then your eyes shall be opened, and ye shall be as gods, knowing good and evil.” [-Genesis 3:4-5, King James Version] “…a tree to be desired to make one wise, and [Eve] did eat, and gave also unto her husband with her; and he did eat. And the eyes of both of them wer...
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people have wanted to fly since we could see birds, cheat the strands of time and fix our many shoulds, feast 'til the end of day, and wake to see our weight wane, fall into the firepits and see ourselves saved- surgery can fix our scars but won't heal our hearts, skeletons too deep to see the sun reach- a single pebble cast caused the tidal wave, so many innocent lives lost, have gone and washed away, those left standing can only watch amazed, hold on to living for another day, maybe tommoro...
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u don't need another revision of this poem, lol. i definately got a new poet to add to my favorites list. you're REALLY good ~ i love your work, don't quit writing :)
mostly i love how this poem flows, and you word choices. you keep it fresh, without redundancy, and i really appreciate that. great work :)
"I’m not intending rhythm, just telling my story, so I guess this is a crap poem :)" - lol... To me the best poetry are simply honest expressions of the heart. You have your pen and pad or keyboard, recorder, and just let your emotions flow. I don't consider this writing to be crap as you put it, but I'm assuming by the little light-hearted smile you attached to it you weren't that serious about that comment, so I'll ignore it a little. My only response to it is that sometimes getting honest ...
good quote, but the title made me think i might be opening something from forest gump.
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