vampyre44's profile
AGE:
16
LOC: Cooperstown, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 03
LOC: Cooperstown, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 03
My name is Erin.
I am 15.
I live in New York.
I love writing, but i usually have to be in the mood (aka something drastic has to happen)
I write mostly when im depressed (or think i am :P)
I also love music, its my life.
Likes: hiking, backpacking, softball, ultimate frisbee, rafting, rivers, anime and manga, reading, video games, etc.
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A deep plunge into the depth of the unknown. Shadows surround, suffocating my hollow breaths, slowly drifting me into a world of silence. I try to reach out, towards the light, (a pointless and failing grasp, I know) and into the darkness I fall. And yet, I am lifted, towards a shining light, tranquil and bright, by the arm, the arm of a friend. I emerge.
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A handsome fox; prematurely greying, fur long and it hangs in a fringe over one eye an eye of gorgeous blue. This fox is sly, always has a grin. The sound that comes from it's mouth is music to my ears. I shall name this fox Keith.
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The first sorrow was love but not a kindled love. Arms that don't return the hug; Stiff, hopeless, unresponsive. She closed her eyes and he was gone. The second sorrow was loss. Losing her friends, her family the one that she loved. Losing herself. Pieces scattered throught her life. Can someone lead her to the lost and found? The third sorrow was loneliness. When love is gone. No one for her to turn to, no shoulder to weep on, As she slipped deeper and deeper Into the...
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If someone says "Is this okay?" you say? Almost here. What would best describe your personality? Hunting for witches. What do you like in a guy/girl? Simple things. How do you feel today? Company car. What is your life's purpose? Specialist. What is your motto? Molasses. What do your friends think of you? When the day met the night. What do you think about very often? The kids don't stand a chance. What is 2 + 2? The story of a girl. What do you think of your best friend? Phantom li...
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It's A Mad World After All Pain engulfs the world with colours of Tyrian purple, where sorrow comes as often as guidance from a teacher. Pictures of death and torture contradict the signs of the lamb and tattered clothed children sit in what was once a beautiful world. Could heaven have sunken to the fiery depths of hell? Or does God not see these horrors. Or has the last bead of life fallen from the end of the necklace? All we can do is whisper and pray.
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I can't find anything to seriously critique besides the absence of punctuation at some points. I've been here so I think you did a great job of summing it up. It was very amusing. Good job!
Its a beautiful poem, but the part that says set alight the town doesnt sound right to me. Still a good haiku though, good job! What game was it?
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Well Twin, I have to say that I like yours a whole lot more than mine. The emotion sounds real and not fake emo like mine :p
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