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Good stuff! I love how you equate writing with the breakdown of sexual bondaries, not in the sense of who one is, but rather in archaic stuffy sense that one should only have one partner, or that one should be married prior to engaging, that kind of breakdown. Anyway, back on topic, I like the imagery and use of words, but I feel the punctuation can be redone. Again, this is poetry, so it can work to be different sometimes. Hope this helps, best of luck! Jason.

Very nice statement about how art is interpreted in a Hai ku. I do like it; I gave a six in the overall category because I thought that Hai Ku was supposed to be about the beauty of nature, et cetra. I may be wrong. Either way, good luck, and I hope this helps! Jason

This was a very interesting read for me. I love disovering new artist or musicians or any type of person who creates their own place. This article makes me want to know more about Joseph Solman. I want to see his paintings, drawings, and so forth. So, from the standpoint that journalism is to educate people about things they might not have otherwise known, in a professional and hopefully unbaised way, then I believe your piece can be counted in that category. I hope this helps, best of luck! ...