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AGE: 31
LOC: Keokuk, IA
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In less than one year, I will experience what very few people get to.  My Double Golden birthday.  Now, everyone has a golden birthday, that happens to be their birthday that corresponds to the day they were born.  For example, I was born on October 10th, so my golden birthday was when I was ten years old. Not very exciting.  However, Next year, my birthday will be a Double Golden birthday because the year in which it matches the day I was born.  So, The next group of...
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Quotes / Unconditional
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Unconditional by definition, cannot exist, because the stipulation of having no conditions is in fact, a condition. Therefore, unconditional does not, and indeed cannot exist.
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Quotes / Racism
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"I don't know what the big deal with racism is anyway, because it only happens to black people."
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Poetry / Untitled #56
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Take pleasure in things that occur every day yet make a lasting impression a hot humid summer night the way your kitchen smells the sound your pets make when you kick them in the head or how your kids scream as you lock them in a closet these are memories to treasure!
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Poetry / Blind Date
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unclenching my fists clumps of hair fall panting heavily, I watch you lie motionless the floor stained deep red and as I hear you gurgling your last I wonder what I'll do theres a rerun of Cheers on........
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Poetry / The Question
It can be amusing how trying to impress others, regardless of the intent, can bring us to doing, in this case, writing a great poem! This is an excellent example, as far as I am concerned, of a rhyming poem, without being silly, or breaking the tempo of the piece. You definitely have the ability to word your feelings, and make them relative to others. Good stuff. Keep up the good writing! Jason
Poetry / empirical
I like it! Great word painting, if I may. I think that this could be a comment on our society, maybe we are becoming over concerned and infatuated with the wrong things? The only "criticism" I could give, is that some of the later imagery does not as easily fit with the beginning, though it can be followed. As if there was a step or two taken, without telling the reader, which is not always a bad thing. Keep up the good writing! Jason.
Novel Treatments / Go White Teeth
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Poetry / Hope And Tears
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Poetry / Cycles
I liked how you were able to capture and relate a whole cycle, travel through the seasons, yet it does not feel forced. The rhythm flows well, I think. Keep up the good work! Jason
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