fun, warm lovable wording, very nice work!

awesome work, wants one craving more!

good work!

He ran the roughness of the utensil across the tips of his phalanges, bringing the edges closer to his digits, smoothing away any sharp or jagged edges- i absolutly love this sentence, your wording is awesome!

loved your wording, poem felt very real, sad...

A wretched soul, bereft of the compassion she had promised, become a vessel for the souls of the souless only to be deprived her own… loved this sentence, poem was captivating, very good

Disorderly seeking to subdue the savage beast of patriotism, loved this sentece, very good perspective of war...