Hello, A good read, rather comical at times but it did pull me it for I needed to know just how you were going to end up. I suppose in our 'civil' society cuffs are a must. Nice job.

Hello, I don't think I would extend it at all. I flows perfectly and shows it has been very well thought out. I can see the time in it. What a well thought out, well written piece with great emotion, depth and visuals! Nice job.

Hi Sandi, fav line “You sound like one of my horses eating corn,” he griped. If I were drinking a soda at this moment it would have come out my nose, just being there hearing it said. This could have been a hundred pages and still be an easy read. I love your stories and how easily you choose to convey them. The entire story, even when things slowed here and there kept my attention. You already know the techies are going to have a party with you on this one for it does possess those evil gram...

Hi Sandi, As usual I found myself waiting to get thru one sentence to get to the following one here. You speak of so many of the things that occur in my mind daily. I work thru many a problem with my writing. By the way, I was the guy in the car using all the hand gestures and yes, I am nuts, thank you for noticing. Anyway, you bring up many pointed truths about us screwballs. We do notice what others miss or things they don't even take time to acknowledge their existence of, which yes, it do...

Hello Sandi, Without saying you already know this is my style of writing so I felt right at home. Dazed would be proud. I did cheat and read many of the reviews, something I make a point of NOT doing, not wanting to bias my viewpoint. So, I went back and read it a few times, nullifying the others perspectives. Sure, a line here, a word there could be modified. You well know me enough by now i am against counting and subjective rhyming. I want you to do whatever the hell it is your beautiful h...

He said, pointing to a hallway directly ahead of where they stood. “Perhaps when you are settled, you might want to take a look at his collection.” Nick nodded and said, “Yes I would very much like to see what kind of gun he used on his last safari to Hells Gates.” Nick’s room was on the third floor. His eyes roamed over the big sitting room with its array of impressive trophies mounted on the white walls. His eyes moved appreciatively over the white Siberian tiger, the most illusive of all t...

A unique topic that turned out quite well. i sense the thought that you have put into this and it came out perfectly. A thief is a thief is thief is a thief. Well done! me...

Hi Kristi, This piece makes so much more sense arter I sat in the pilots seat and burned one. Nice job and see you og the return trip!

Hi Sandi (japan) I do like what you have done here with your revisions. It is easier to read and absorb. I loved the term aqua. What a perfect place to enter in this dark but still visual piece. Many of your key words allow the reader to grasp your moving picture here. The bleak emotion entangled with lost passions of yesteryear blend perfectly. Like I need to tell you this, you already know it. Sandi, you paint wonderful pictures of your life, constantly blending reality with some entertaini...

Hi there, Thank you for adding in your comments, though quite bizarre I must say. For it assist the reader in understanding how and where you stand. It is laid out perfectly, he unknowing the danger that lurks deep inside of you, for fear you possibly instead? Very clever and well written. Then you reach in and openly display your tender softness of your soul, beautiful. That takes talent my dear. I applaud your courage a feel for you truly, just for having to go thru this and then even more ...