This poem is more or less an inspirational piece for incoming college freshmen. I feel like I, as well as many other college freshmen, can relate to every message this poem is sending - The lonliness, the comfort in wallowing in your own self pitty bc going outside your comfort zone is unnatural, the will to seek happiness, or friendship in my case, in the places you wouldn't normally, however, its satisfying to feel a sense of belonging. Yes - i loved this. Very good, very emotionally provo...

hah this is pretty short and depressing. but that isn't necessarily a bad thing, wouldn't you agree? it expresses your emotions and your feelings about your life. It's great to put your thoughts and feelings onto paper, or in this case, onto the web. I didn't expect it to end so abruptly though! Oh, and I'm with you on the rancid smell and cold linolium. I just moved into my dorm room and one of my room mates brought this filthy old rug that stinks up the entire room full of must. But we need...

I love the censory detail you have added in this poem. That is truly one of the qualities that makes this worth reading. It really shows how passionate you are about this. At least I felt like you were writing about something you felt very passionately about and that is also a strong quality to portray in your writing. I really enjoyed this poem and I hope you keep the writing up. :)

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