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AGE:
25
LOC: Ridgefield, CT
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 09
LOC: Ridgefield, CT
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 09
i write poetry. it is my native language, my mother tongue. i also paint, enjoy long walks, meditation, being out in nature and time in with the soul and the wonderful art it provides. i also write for the stage. heart and its giving directing. living in a challenging realms beyond constructs and criteria marks. i like to read, exploration, reading see view enjoying others, honestly-
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in the past they settled near it provided them a ready source of food the act of following seemed to provide a purpose the streams twists and turns they could easily relate it their lives to being its subjects in a life where their jobs feeding and surviving caused just a moment of release pressure off gravity of earth
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the new time has a guise of not resting, like this self as i pass around from village to town viciously in search for a home with three rooves that can be slept on like they are the travellers making their way thru their own painting of time and they're their reflection on that time or art or this own my own personal Dada
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made marked by dizzied distances made rotten by a distant dying star son, you could be the enemy of no one you could be existing but you walk on your thinking and remember its not your make its your clay.
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the first two lines are very strong particularly in langauge, which is a good way to start out, another strong point is that you create powerful images, that pull the reader along with your poem. your lines vary in length with fine and you have line control which is good. in your longer lines you could cut out some of the one syllable words they mess up the meteor, for example, To share with you this moment in the timeline of my life. i think you could take out the "in the" your meaning would...
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