tstar11's profile

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AGE: 21
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 25

Hello I’m Ashlee I’m not the best writer here on urbis but I’m going to put some better things. I love this site so feel free to request as a friend or just a message.  Please read my stuff I would suggest my poem you make me,and any other piece. I go here on urbis every day. If you look at my work you will notice errors such as spelling and typos are my specialty. some day I want to travel the world and Wright my experiences I got into writing by my teacher Mrs. N and my sister YOU GUYS ROCK !!!!!!!!! oh p.s. i never say no to a friend request!!!!!!!!

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Poetry / why
Version 1
2 Reviews   2 Comments
Why would you hurt me Why would you lie Why would you not care Why cant you realize  
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Poetry / music
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Every sound and beat Makes every song complete The beat will always repeat And the rhythm is so unique This is music It speaks to the heart Every time it starts And everyone has a part This is music Music is me Don’t you see?  
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Haiku/Senryu / friends
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They fight They care And they’re always be there  
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Haiku/Senryu / writing
Version 1
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It’s not just words It’s a way to express It’s a way to confess  
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Lyrics / don't go away
Version 1
1 Review   1 Comment
I know what I said was mean, And I’m sorry, I’ll take it back I won’t talk smack Corus: I just want you back, don’t go, Go away, Cause I want you to stay Because it hurts me For you to leave, I’ll change I’ll do it over, I can’t take it again, Everyone seems to be leaving, But you’re my true love I’m not done, Don’t go I’ve had too many, leave All because me, I don’t know myself anymore, I don’t even get it, I don...
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Action Adventure / rOBBING dISMAL
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Flash Fiction / xv
is this a note or what
Wow, I like how everything was one big story and it made sense. I didn't see any gramar or spelling errors. I like how it made you want to know what happened, it kept you reading. Good job.
Haiku/Senryu / Together
very strong in so little words. no miss spelling but i would not put theperiod at the end very good breazed wright threw it. i geuss you do wright things toghether
Horror / Bite After Bite
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