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Short Story / Bloody Hell!
Version 3
16 Reviews   20 Comments
“Clear!” Yelled the lead surgeon, holding up the paddles. The attending physicians and nurses raised their hands and stepped back from the lifeless patient on the operating table. I stepped back too instinctively, even though there was a pane of glass between the operating theatre and the observation gallery where I watched the proceedings. I grimaced as the doctor applied the jumper-cables, then WHAM! The prone figure arched his back involuntarily as 20,000 volts coursed through him. Was th...
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Short Story / Small Wonder
Version 1
14 Reviews   23 Comments
Who says sitting in the bleachers at a football match is boring? As I watched the kids playing one Saturday morning, a juicy snippet of a rather personal conversation drifted up from three extremely cute soccer-moms sitting in the row in front of me. “You’ve got to be kidding! Everyone knows the big ones are the best!” I immersed myself in my hot latte and stared blindly at the pitch as I strained to hear more… The comment was from Aoi, a ‘hiso’ Thai whose her husband owned a factory. They we...
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Non-fiction / Write On!
Version 1
13 Reviews   13 Comments
Keyboard clatter. Penny drops. No matter.
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Non-fiction / Returning
Version 1
13 Reviews   13 Comments
Churning burning, tossing, turning. Not earning.
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Non-fiction / Go for it.
Version 1
14 Reviews   13 Comments
Order only it could if I.
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