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LOC: Chicago, IL
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Non-fiction / Tiger Tricks
Version 1
16 Reviews   0 Comments
Tigers belong in the wild. The few people who spend any amount of time taming them are exceptions to the rule. They might feel a calling to a profession like circus tiger tamer or movie animal wrangler that propels them down their dangerous career path. However, even the most successful ones can end up making a fatal mistake. The Crocodile Hunter, recently, and Gentle Ben's handler in the 1970's learned the hard way that wild animals are not safe. Through my experience playing trumpet in the...
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Short Story / Three Misapprehensions
Version 2
11 Reviews   0 Comments
The Three Misapprehensions The freckled sunset smiled like a simple country girl who still knew the sincere, natural world. However, I was busy dreaming of a stressful situation. My head smacked against the Plexiglass commuter train window yet again as my glove dropped with a wet smack on the slushy floor. With a resentful sneer, I decided to stay awake the last three stops. I cherished the March sunset. The sight of the sun at ten after six represented an emergence into happier seasons. In t...
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Short Story / Three Misapprehensions
Version 1
7 Reviews   3 Comments
The freckled sunset smiling like a simple country girl who still knew the sincere, natural world, my head smacked against the Plexiglass commuter train window, yet again. My glove dropped with a wet smack on the slushy floor, at the same time. With a resentful sneer, I decided to stay awake the last three stops. I cherished the March sunset, for, in my dreary cubicle half-life, the sight of the sun at ten after six represented an emergence into happier seasons. In two days, I would be alive ...
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Short Story / Can't Live Without Love
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Poetry / Auditory High
Altered states of consciousness are special, for sure. "Something swirls past my face" is lost on me. A nice image follows, though.
This is quite a funny story, even though the reason and motivation are unknown. I'm glad I knew there was no reason before I read it, because I would be looking for some reason. So, I would recommend making sure the reader knows in the text (it was in the reviewers notes), unless you want the reader to suspiciously question, all the way through, why someone like that would care so much about a contest like that.
Poetry / Comedy of Errors
It's a strong brew of metaphysics and culture that inspires many thoughts. After reading this, the next time I see the bumper sticker that says "If you're not outraged, you haven't been paying attention." I will think, "Or, I can choose to laugh at this comedy of errors," while trying to buoy myself up on the humanity that can stop the preventable errors, at least locally.
Lyrics / But It's Alright
I like the lyrics. It all depends on how you sing them. To see them in print doesn't have quite the same effect. I don't even know if you are a singer, but I would guess so. If so, good luck, and keep singing. It is hard to make it when the economy turns down, but still worth the pursuit.
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