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AGE:
44
LOC: Canada
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 27
LOC: Canada
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 27
My Name is Karen. I am 42. I am attempting to write a novel. Dead on Arrival. I have several ideas in the works—however I would really like to get this one off the ground. I belong to other groups on msn to have my work looked at. I don’t mind constructive criticism, just level my ego and dignity intact please. I recently started to dabble in poetry as well. I am not confident in this area yet but feed back so far as been pretty positive.
Besides writing, I do love to read. I also enjoy Playing on Pogo ==It’s great stress relief.
I am married with a teenaged daughter, and I have four grown step kids—all adults. We have 2 cats, and we live in Peterborough Ontario Canada.
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Prologue Present Day 2008 The glass slammed down on the bar. The barkeep filled the glass and passed it to the dude. “Good show” the bartended said nodding to the comic on stage. “He’s okay, I have seen much better” The stranger replied. “You know comedy?” “I was comedy; years ago. Then I started my own club, Hosted the best up-and-comers. I guided Carey, and Myers, on their way up. I was the Simon Cowell of the comedy world. I discovered more new talent than Cowell can shake his finger at.” ...
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Chapter 3 Vince was sitting at his desk in the squad room when the phone rang. It was Lissa with the details about the dead guy’s next of kin. He took down the address, thanked her and hung up. “Hey Swifty, he bellowed across the room. We got next of kin, time to do the death call.” “God I hate this part of the job“. Myra said half to herself and half to Vince. “Worse that witnessing autopsies?” ”Much, dealing with the dead is so much easier than the ones left behind.” “Shitty, but true. Let’...
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Most likely to…. There I was, returning to the scene of the crime. It had been years since I set foot in my high school. I still wonder what I would be walking back into hallways full of memories, some of them good some I'd rather not relive. Thankfully, this time, I was here as an attendance secretary. My husband Paul had gotten transferred to the offices of the Hydroelectric Company, in the town I grew up in. Upon learning of this transfer I started applying for jobs in the area. I passed t...
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Bitchin’ Mondays Imagine if you will, four friends getting together every Monday night to whine and complain about what ticks them off. They picked Monday, as there’s not much to do while the other half is watching NFL football. They take turns sitting around each others kitchens to discuss what to do about the banes of their existence. For Cassie, it’s mostly her cheating, lazy, beer guzzling husband, Dave that sends her blood pressure skyward. She can’t prove he’s cheating, but there’s eno...
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Chapter 3 Channy decided to consult a lawyer to get things rolling. The lawyer she chose was a street lawyer by the name of Debra Cruise. Deb had come highly recommended by a bar patron who had gotten a mega –settlement from the cheating’ scum husband. Channy outlined the fact that it was a heat of the moment marriage where neither of them was sober at the time. Debra pointed out that this alone were grounds for an annulment. Channy also revealed that Charlie had a violent and unpredictable t...
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well stated in a succinct way. Good job Stories Created would have worked too.
what started out so pretty was quickly trnsformed into something heinous. great transition and change in focus.
It has a nice flow and a good story to tell. It was haunting yet hopeful.
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