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AGE: 16
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
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envious rays of beaming light, once again are pointed at my eyes. a plan annoynce and unknown setback makes me furious and want to attack. envious rays of beaming light once again are pointed at your eyes. how do you feel is it the same pain, or do you love these convertations and pointles rage? i come in peace i swear, although theirs still fear, fear of your powerful tantrums in the past. i wish i could catch up to your expectations but there way to fast. so we both need help i have realize...
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disorder,disorder is here, you no longer think clear. what to do, where to go? you dont understad it but you say "so." disorder,disorder can make you feel insane like a simple needle to a vain. you say disorder,disorder is the only order that controls me, disorder,disorder is all i ever see. you take a deep breath and you try to realize altough you once again begin to fanizie. so now your drowding in impure thoughts it feels as if your starting to rot. you want to go back you truely...
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i am nothing but a human, i can not expect for perfection. i am nothing but a human all i can do is strive, strive for the best i can be. i am nothing but a human all i can do is be thankful, thankful for what i have because not everbody has what i have. although same goes for everyone because we all have diffrent situations at difrent times. i am nothing but a human so all i can do is live my life for what i want to live it for. if you have not yet realize what you want to live for then sear...
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its that one feeling you cant fight. it tells you to think twice. its very wise becase it hasnt been wrong very many times before. " somone else tells you just go for it!" but you trust the feeling more . you turn back and come to your sences, although you still dont want to be disapointed in. your feeling speaks one more time, "maybe you should listen to me, i mean afterall you've known me longer?"
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as it grows like a boy grows into a man, or as it dreams with such little effort. this thing as i may speak of is only the brain. the brain is starving, the brain is calling your name it tells you to stop and think or even take a chance. if thou disobeys the brain then you may suffer as well, because you are the brain you are the techer you are anything you want to be.so with this wondrous gift god has given to all how come we can only use such a small part of it? is it because we dont try ha...
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you did a good job drawing the reader into the story.
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Poetry / Saved
i understand what you were trying to do with this peice. this really does sum up what religon is.
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Flash Fiction / Clerical Error
it had great detail and i like how you did the ending.
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