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AGE:
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LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 20
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 20
Don’t be too harsh when reviewing my work. I’m easily hurt – and do you really want to hurt me? ;_;
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I like to pretend Inside, my heart is bleeding But they'll never know
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Long without water The petals began to wilt I had a red rose
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All the things I've done Have lead me away from you You're so far away
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You said you would come But I didn't see you there I thought this was love
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True, and unfortunate. :( The only thing I would suggest is that you remain consistent with 'one'-- 'Only after one's death will one know the purpose of life'.
Wow, great quote. It's worded very well. I have no suggestions on how it could be re-phrased. Well done there. As for the content, it's so tragic. I felt really sad. Like, because you know that you have a bad hand. It must feel quite sad. Like they say 'ignorance is bliss', but you're aware. :/ The message has been said a few times before in other pieces, but I think this one's really cool the way you're using cards. And it seems 'bigger' the way you say you're fooling 'the world'. I like thi...
Well, curiosity killed the cat. lol. Your quote would work if it was 'the cat was killed because it was curious'. But at the moment (to me), it's looking like: 'if the pen is red... what colour is the pen??' The question I ask myself most is: why a CAT? I guess 'cause it starts with a C.
LOL! Ewww!! Made me laugh, and a lot of others, too, I'm sure! I'm scared of old people now. :P >_>
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