thegoldskull's profile
AGE:
25
LOC: Pelzer, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 14
LOC: Pelzer, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 14
I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I feel it is the only way people listen to me. Wether they understand or not, I have no clue, but to get them to read it, or listen to it I feel is half of the battle.
I am in a very happy relationship, and have lots of pets, and love to travel whenever I get the chance.
I’ve had some questions about the Mother and other words I use. It may help you to know that I am a Pagan.
I love to meet new people and read what others have written. I don’t mind being honest, and would like that in return. Thank you for your time.
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Curse this stricken face These vile tears And traitors heart Give not into thought Memory or feeling Take back the flutter Turn away the smile Leave me as you found me I will heal come eternity Shards of the shattered dreams Crushed beneath your easy banter Finish your goodbye sentence Take everything with you Do not feel Cry or remember Watch the steps Walking out of your life The depth of pain will hit With your head on your pillow tonight Leave now The way you came While needle pulling thr...
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I hate you all for what you do You sit there and gloat While we struggle to try To just obtain what little we can You do nothing to help Those you brought in While we are denied Just that one wish You get whatever it is you please And then when it comes time to feed You beg and plead For us to go and spend Every corner we turn Every bridge we cross All we hear is get this for me And no for us I hate you for what you do I try to stand tall and get us through We crumble and stumble Try to get a...
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Every crashing wave that comes Plundering over the broken beach Ripping and raping at the sand. Tormenting and pulling Until the only things left Are raw scars and open wounds. Pulling out further, the water Gives little time for Licking wounds before Crashing waves come in again.
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Why can't I fly away with you Lift my wings to touch everlasting blue Soar high above the trees and towns My chipper song turning all frowns Why can't I fly away with you Maybe in a flock or just with one or two Perch atop an oak, elm or holly We'd sit and sing being jolly Why can't I fly away with you And see things the way you do Every feeder making us fatter Rain or shine wouldn't matter Why can't I fly away with you It would be a wish come true To spend just a day flying Instead of a life...
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You are now just a burning memory In our little world You felt the same rapture My heart was yours to capture Like butterfly wings Brushed by human hands I started to falter It was you that held my hand Coloring my world with such splendor I did not see the bars to which I surrendered Then came the day when I again took flight The look in your eyes when leaving your sight Haunts me in my dreams With you I knew joy With you I knew peace With you I knew laughter Flying from flower to flower I o...
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The rhythm is good, but the imagery is everywhere. You go from a skinny dip, to a coffee house, to turtles. Just seems random to me.
Really good. The only thing that stuck out to me was "found in a fruit basket." I have this beautiful nature scene in my head, and as I read this line I see one of those college paintings. It seems out of place.
Very powerful using so few words. Really a great read. Love the line "Black liquid death gives life to the few". Says it all.
Wow. The last sentence gets you. Great imagery. You feel the frustration with the "kid", and the underage girls. It's a really good start.
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