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AGE:
17
LOC: New Hampton, NH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 27
LOC: New Hampton, NH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 27
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Can you tell me who I am Can you tell me what you see You thought you knew the truth You never knew the real me The only thing you recognize are the lies I hide behind Come closer my dear, come closer And you'll sink into my mind don't try to figure me out Give me the benefit of doubt don't worry about this Just sit back and reminisce Of days when I was clean Look at me now, so obscene It's a shame without a doubt You'll never figure me out Is this becoming scary or a little bit conf...
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If we could trade places, you'd see Why I'm different from you, why I'm me These walls are closing in, I'm full of doubt This life is a disaster, there's no way out I've got a confession I'm breaking down and My insecurity is tearing me apart I've got a confession I'm breaking down and I'd fix myself if I knew where to start I'm tormenting myself every moment I'm still breathing I've got a confession I'm breaking down and My insecurity is tearing me apart The corners of my mind feel so cold M...
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It's thursday night nothing feels right and you're not helping much Waiting for your call If you bother at all How do I still miss your touch? Pre-Chorus I hate this state that I'm in Still I wait 'till fate drags me down Chorus Your calls never leave a good feeling in the air Not because of what you said But because you're not here- you're over there I should quit while I'm ahead So I could stop pretending that you care What happens tomorrow It's sunday morning It's getting boring Wait...
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See Do you see through me Can you read my mind Are we just that personal? Oh Baby Please I'm on my knees Your smile is all I need To keep my glass half full Chorus I need to tell you how I feel But I don't know where to start I can't help thinking what we have is real And now you've stolen my heart You If you only knew How much you mean to me Would I scare you away? Oh baby Why Don't make me cry I can't help who I am What's there left to say Repeat Chorus Bridge I wear my heart right on my s...
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Last night I thought I saw you standing there Glaring Staring Then you left, vanishing in the dark air Was it really all just a dream? Gleaming Scheming I'm so scared now, I could scream PreChorus Reassure me that this isn't real But I feel your hands shaking In real-time, horror looses its appeal Chorus Why do you plague me? And make shadows take form? Now I live in fear Of calm before the storm I'm so paranoid Please don't make me see what you have become Why do you plague me? The ni...
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I like the feeling I get from this. I get a sense of exhaustion or being worn out, especially after a long day of work. This reminds me a little of the poem "One Art" by Elizabeth Bishop, in the way it's structured. The only thing that bugs me a little is I don't really see where the direction, or focus, of this poem is. It seems to flutter from one frame of thought to the next, without much of a connection. However, poetry is a bit subjective so maybe it's just me. Overall, well done =]
I think this has potential to be strong story , but it still lacks that individuality- that certain something that makes it memorable. It was relatively captivating, but it all seemed more visual than substantial. I think your male character could be developed into a very interesting character, since he's a warrior but he's not cold-blooded, there's room to show different sides of his personality. To end, I think giving the reader a time frame and location would make this stronger. You give a...
I like this, largely because of how it can reflects our society. People are so sheep-like and willing to let others do everything for them. However, they tend to frown upon those who see things differently and, thus, are more innovative. The irony being that they need these innovators if they want to see progress and change in the world. I don't particularly understand the poem at the beginning, nor do I understand how it pertains to your subject matter, but it's still nice. Overall, very wel...
I like how this flows together- it could almost pass as being lyrical in the way it's written. I don't see anything that needs improvement really. Well done
I really like how this is both realistic and visual. I can see it playing in my eyes. What makes me curious is if you're trying to channel a message of any form when your main character tells the cashier to keep the change, after being asked for change by a homeless man shortly beforehand. Overall, well done. Flash fiction done justice for once
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