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AGE:
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GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 16
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 16
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I have a sense of being familiar with the mind of a person who can write and expand their experiences through words on paper. Good people write great things!
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That day I walked away from your room and your life, I never would have guessed I was walking away from my heart. Those days after I couldn't stop thinking about you. I broke down and cried when I finally realized that I really do love you, not just because i say i do, but because i felt it too. In every dream i was with you as a couple. There were dreams of us with a child calling out to you. A little blonde blued eyed boy, just like you. I could not just walk away from those feelings and ou...
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This strong heart beats against my breast telling a love story.
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You grew up knowing that everything was going to be different. Different in the sense that you would never grow up. Because always feeling young adds a beautiful purity to the owner of the feeling. Everyone whom stands in the middle of the street and pretends to be superman or woman or anyone who yells at the top of their lungs just to feel the ringing in their ears, are not the people in the world willing to grow up. Those people are the ones that create the great films like Harry Potter and...
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To this empty heart that beats, do no burden me. Allow my happiness to remain in the abundance it has found. Writhing and flowing in the colors of paint forever. Create the colors that justify my happiness' beauty. To the blue and green thank you for your brilliance. To the reds and yellows thank you for your fire. These colors enfume my soul with creativity. To the body this soul is bound, live well and permit life to enter at will. The soul needs to be fed grand colors, colors painted over ...
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How can you touch me sweetly and look into my eyes, All the while telling me how beautiful I am. What do you see when you look in my eyes, Do you see your own vanity, your image that is so erotic to the touch. No you see the shit brown that covers the pupils to my eyes and it disgusts you. Life to you is a revolving door and you are the hinge it is placed to encircle. Always spinning in the same direction to follow you. Well honey, my pride and dignity has run up and the highway is long so I ...
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I think I have fallen in love with this poem. I can remember mornings like this, feeling the awkwardness and the excitement. I didnt find anything wrong with the form or grammar. It was clear and flowed straight through to the end. I enjoyed it a lot, it will be in my favorites list. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with the public.
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This is one of those short stories you think will turn out to be a sad one then it twists and turns into a happy ending (Sorta considering the circumstance). Very good detail. I really liked the way you opened up with the telephone conversation. It lead the story straight through to the end with the plot. I enjoyed this piece, very cute, and surprising. Keep it up!
I enjoyed reading this very much. It reminds me of the relationship I am in now. I wish you would have gone into depth a little more about why you needed help at the end. Otherwise the poem overall was a very good read.
I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written with the transition between buildings and an actual being. I hope to read more from you!
Does the age have to be sixteen or is it really just the younger generation? I liked this piece it was fun to read.
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