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AGE: 23
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 29

If you want to know more about me visit my webpage at myspace.com/elauramaiden

I have a sense of being familiar with the mind of a person who can write and expand their experiences through words on paper. Good people write great things!

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Release
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9 Reviews   4 Comments
That day I walked away from your room and your life, I never would have guessed I was walking away from my heart. Those days after I couldn't stop thinking about you. I broke down and cried when I finally realized that I really do love you, not just because i say i do, but because i felt it too. In every dream i was with you as a couple. There were dreams of us with a child calling out to you. A little blonde blued eyed boy, just like you. I could not just walk away from those feelings and ou...
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Poetry / Serenity
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This strong heart beats against my breast telling a love story.
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14 Reviews   1 Comment
You grew up knowing that everything was going to be different. Different in the sense that you would never grow up. Because always feeling young adds a beautiful purity to the owner of the feeling. Everyone whom stands in the middle of the street and pretends to be superman or woman or anyone who yells at the top of their lungs just to feel the ringing in their ears, are not the people in the world willing to grow up. Those people are the ones that create the great films like Harry Potter and...
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Poetry / My Paint
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1 Review   0 Comments
To this empty heart that beats, do no burden me. Allow my happiness to remain in the abundance it has found. Writhing and flowing in the colors of paint forever. Create the colors that justify my happiness' beauty. To the blue and green thank you for your brilliance. To the reds and yellows thank you for your fire. These colors enfume my soul with creativity. To the body this soul is bound, live well and permit life to enter at will. The soul needs to be fed grand colors, colors painted over ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / A Heartbreak
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How can you touch me sweetly and look into my eyes, All the while telling me how beautiful I am. What do you see when you look in my eyes, Do you see your own vanity, your image that is so erotic to the touch. No you see the shit brown that covers the pupils to my eyes and it disgusts you. Life to you is a revolving door and you are the hinge it is placed to encircle. Always spinning in the same direction to follow you. Well honey, my pride and dignity has run up and the highway is long so I ...
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I enjoyed this piece. It was a good story about the sanctity of a woman who was in a no woman zone. This story gives me inspiration to work for something even though all the odds are against me.
Haiku/Senryu / 9/28/07
Simple and yet very meaningful. I like this very much. Good job!
I would have to say this is the most entertaining piece I have read in a long while. I would suggest that maybe some more description of the lady Crew killed would be good, like adding facial expressions. Otherwise, great piece cannot wait for the next chapter.
Short Story / Memory of a Mother
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Poetry / 8 a.m.
I think I have fallen in love with this poem. I can remember mornings like this, feeling the awkwardness and the excitement. I didnt find anything wrong with the form or grammar. It was clear and flowed straight through to the end. I enjoyed it a lot, it will be in my favorites list. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with the public.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Read At Your Own Risk
Romance / What I want

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