Extremely Short But Very Effective. It makes me think of all the things I can apply these words in life.

Very good Beginning poem. Gets the message across. The Only I would say is that you kind of used stressful pain alittle too much, but other that awesome job.

Really Great, Awesome Poem. The Flow is Smooth, Words in a stream! The imagery is very great as well. Make me think of someone who kind of outgrown someone they love. "The ship has sailed, leaving a passenger behind, My ocean is no longer deep enough, to hold the both of us anymore" My favorite verse. The ending "just a passing thought" line is the cherry on the sundae. the image of all these words and feelings just being part of one single, momentary thought, that's life in general. Awesome!