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AGE: 21
LOC: La Quinta, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 11

The Boognish, Cigarettes, Lighters, Wrestling, Ween, Ipod, Life, My Girl, I’ve Learned to enjoy Life, It’s Good!

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The WEIRD!, it flows through the Veins along side the Blood. Reaching every Pinnacle of the known Universe. Cloudy Mysteries replay in room GH of my Brain established federal building, 2nd Floor. GOD Its so awful, Blood on the walls, mutilated bodies on the floor, hours upon hours scientific work. The WEIRD! It has invaded my Cranium. The Deltas, the Fault Lines, the Cracks allow it to flow freely through the Landscape of my Cerebro.Out of desperation, The Image of the Goddess of Beauty sprea...
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My fate was sealed. There was nothing to do except wait for my death. Then it happened, the pain of my body hitting the ground below, grinding little pieces of earth into my face. My legs felt like Jello after you've only let it sit in the fridge for about an hour and 45 minutes. To my surprise, I wasn’t dead. I had merely broken through the upper crust of Hell and was once again free falling towards the ground below. This impact though was not as painful as the first, mainly due to the fact ...
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Walking by the woods, One December Morning. I felt Sad with a Hateful look at life. When I stumbled upon my old Nemesis, Dr. Von Yorgi. He sat on a old, rotting tree Stump with his head down and his eyes half open. When he first became my nemesis, he was unstoppable. He dominated anyone and everyone that got in the way of fulfilling his quest, To take over the universe. What sat on that tree stump was nothing but a shell of that man. I looked at him for a few minutes before finally saying "Wh...
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I FEEL, THE TORMENT, WRAP AROUND, INFECTING, THE COLD, THE DARKNESS, INTO MY SOUL. I FEEL, YOUR LOVE, FLEEING ME, BURSTING THROUGH, MY WOUNDED HEART, I FEEL, NO MORE, NO LONGER.
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Estoy caminando El camino, Directo al Infierno Pasando Memorias de tu y yo. Memories que e amado siempre, Pero que estoy odiando con cada paso. Memorias de tu cara y tus labios. Memorias que me estan matando por dentro, Cada dia que no te miro. Estas Memorias se han convertido a demonios. Demonios que no puedo destruir solo. Tu eres como una Hermosa Maldición Una maldicion que me matara hasta que llege al infierno. Con mis ojos cerrados, camino este camino.
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Poetry / Reckless Motive
Really Great, Awesome Poem. The Flow is Smooth, Words in a stream! The imagery is very great as well. Make me think of someone who kind of outgrown someone they love. "The ship has sailed, leaving a passenger behind, My ocean is no longer deep enough, to hold the both of us anymore" My favorite verse. The ending "just a passing thought" line is the cherry on the sundae. the image of all these words and feelings just being part of one single, momentary thought, that's life in general. Awesome!
Poetry / STRESSFUL PAIN
Very good Beginning poem. Gets the message across. The Only I would say is that you kind of used stressful pain alittle too much, but other that awesome job.
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Flash Fiction / Six Word Memoir
Extremely Short But Very Effective. It makes me think of all the things I can apply these words in life.
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