the parts i love most on this poem are: "Beginning where we ended defines where we begin." and,.,. "Defining empty spaces, we space ourselves apart." the poem you wrote has a nice feel to it,.,. and it made me feel like how in a relationship everyone usually go on circles,.,.

the parts i loved are: "To whom shall we run to and hide, our mothers?" "Time to wake up and foresee into the future that is us" "Find the potential within us and fulfill it with class" (especially this one),.,. "For nobody is to blame but us" this poem is really good,.,. people who are still cowardly and are too lazy to act to fulfill what they want in life should read this,.,. i'm sure it will open their eyes to start doing something now because we are the ones who hold the key to our own f...

it was a satisfying read!!! :) the flow and rhythm of this poem was good,.,. the part i loved was this: "Then I see the thorns, So razor sharp, To twist, to rip, Even the purest heart. Red for romance from Cupid’s dart, Red for blood straight from the heart." it was interesting comparing the positive and negative meaning of the redness of the rose,.,. red for love and red for blood,.,. :)

the poem was very direct,.,. the sadness,.,. the longing for the person it's talking about and the regret of the speaker for his mistakes was very evident,.,. the emotions came out really good and it was a nice read!!! :) the part i liked most: "All I want to do Is be your everything Your escape from pain Not just a reason to be insane"...

that was a really emotional piece,.,. i pity the man,.,. losing the people he loved,.,. well,.,. i didnt see any grammatical error,.,. but in page one,.,. there's a wrong spelling,.., ('parish' should have been 'perish' right???) well,.,. that's all i noticed,.,. i guess it's because i was too hooked on the story,.,. it was good!!! :) specially at the end when he felt so guilty,.,. it was ironic,.,. how he fell asleep because of the music when his intention for turning the radio on was too be...

overall i think it was a really nice story!!! :) it was very itneresting,.,. (and i wonder if monsters like that do exist??? hahaha) well,.,. there are a few typos,.,. (there are at least two,.,. i think,.,. i saw on the first and second page,.,.) really interesting read!!! ;)

wow!!! :) that was a wonderful personification,.,. :D hehehe how you associated Autumn as a woman sounded quite romantic [in my opinion],.,. ;) this was truly inspiring,.,. i mean..,, considering all the things existing in this world as something with a life,.,. most people seem to be forgetting that already,.,. but within this short story these little things were brought back to life,.,. ;D