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AGE:
17
LOC: Japan
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 23
LOC: Japan
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 23
i am a simple yet complicated person,.,.
i am outgoing but shy,.,.
talkative but hates noise,.,.
quiet but dont like too much peace,.,.
calm and nervous,.,.
thoughtful and yet insensitive,.,.
basically,.,. i am weird and unpredictable,.,.
i think i have a dual personality,.. hahaha
the first one is rational,.,. open-minded,.,. loving and carefree,.,.
while the other is moody,.,. harsh,.,. pessimistic and unfeeling,.,.
I AM WHO I AM!!!
if you dont like me then that’s okay,.,.
even though wearing this mask it is only because i want to protect myself from people who will hurt me,.,.
i will remain true to myself and true to the people i trust the most,.,.
hehehe
i am a dreamer,.,. not a doer,.,.
i dont take risks,.,.
i fear …
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I'll stay as me, that's what I said Still these words keep ringing in my head Asking me if I am really true--- To myself and also to all of you Back then, I remember those moments Hearing everyone's hurtful comments They never said it directly, only behind my back Talking about me and the things that I lack At that time, I began to pretend Just so that I could put an end--- To their whispers and the painful words they speak Words that pierced my heart and made me weak I had rarely spoken abou...
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TOO LATE The world sleeps And she wakes To a lonely starless night An angel weeps As her heart breaks Losing all her will to fight Her words unspoken Feelings never told Ever since they had met His promises broken Secrets never unfold Does her heart hold regret? She misses him so And he did too But then his feelings had passed Still her feelings grow Even though she knew Theirs, was never meant to last And as she heaved One final breath away Saying her sad goodbye to all The last to leave Her...
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wow!!! :) that was a wonderful personification,.,. :D hehehe how you associated Autumn as a woman sounded quite romantic [in my opinion],.,. ;) this was truly inspiring,.,. i mean..,, considering all the things existing in this world as something with a life,.,. most people seem to be forgetting that already,.,. but within this short story these little things were brought back to life,.,. ;D
overall i think it was a really nice story!!! :) it was very itneresting,.,. (and i wonder if monsters like that do exist??? hahaha) well,.,. there are a few typos,.,. (there are at least two,.,. i think,.,. i saw on the first and second page,.,.) really interesting read!!! ;)
that was a really emotional piece,.,. i pity the man,.,. losing the people he loved,.,. well,.,. i didnt see any grammatical error,.,. but in page one,.,. there's a wrong spelling,.., ('parish' should have been 'perish' right???) well,.,. that's all i noticed,.,. i guess it's because i was too hooked on the story,.,. it was good!!! :) specially at the end when he felt so guilty,.,. it was ironic,.,. how he fell asleep because of the music when his intention for turning the radio on was too be...
the poem was very direct,.,. the sadness,.,. the longing for the person it's talking about and the regret of the speaker for his mistakes was very evident,.,. the emotions came out really good and it was a nice read!!! :) the part i liked most: "All I want to do Is be your everything Your escape from pain Not just a reason to be insane"...
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