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LOC: Everett, WA
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There are so many things I want to say But everytime I open my mouth the words seem to slip away So I'm goin to gather all of my words together And hope that this time they come out better I was lost in a never ending night Hateing everyone in sight Holding onto that last thread of life with all my might Then you showed me the light Like you were sent from above Showing me what its like to love Day by day and now its may I know my love for you will never sway Tho right now we are far apart I'...
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Wow I really liked this poem, it was very good. There isnt one part that I didnt like, it all flowed very well. I applaued you, you did an amazing job!!! Well done.
I really liked this poem a lot, I really felt for the girl. I could picture it as if it was in front of me, very good job. Look forward to seeing more of yours. =D
I like it, the only thing I would suggest is if there is someone that you want to see you to add them into it. To make it where the reader feels more of what you feel.
I liked it a lot I think that's true with a lot of guys, the only thing that I would suggest changing is stupidest to just stupid. Other than that it was good. Good job!!!
I liked it good job. I really liked the puppet show part I think that is the best part out of the poem
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