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AGE:
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LOC: Lakeland, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 10
LOC: Lakeland, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 10
My genre is sci-fi, sword & sorcery. My trilogy, Underland: The Dark Reign, The Chosen One and Omega Red are finished after rewriting them.
I live in sweaty, hot Florida but then again when isn’t this state sweaty and hot but I grew up in New Jersey. That being said please no “what exit” jokes. (I suspect Exit 40 off of Route 80)
I am a newbie here therefore please be patient with my question, comments, and answers.
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Two Trolong soldiers roughly dragged the prisoner into the main entrance of the Swica Territorial Detention Center with a third soldier walking behind them pointing a pistol at the prisoner’s head and hold a first aid kit. The soldiers dragged the cursing prisoner with such speed that it seemed to take just seconds to descend a flight of stairs and down a long corridor. The prisoner was just getting his bearings when he was shoved into a featureless detention cell with a bed bolted and cemen...
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CH 2 The Emperor screamed in anger. He was lying face down with two stone trees weighing two tons on top of him. Using the energy from the Power to enhance his arm strength, Charek easily pushed himself up to a kneeling position. The stone trees rolled off of him and loudly crashed to the ground. Krof! The Cravatan jumped to his feet, whirling around in search of Argen and his Crown. I was so close to having what is rightfully mine! A shiver ran up his spine. Charek's thoughts screamed at him...
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A sign of a great piece of work is when the audience hungers for more and right now I am hungry to read more of this piece. The two pages flowed well with awesome imagery and excellent grammar. Well done! Is there more to this story?
Very creative to write a poem from a child's point of view. Furthermore, very insightful to highlight the human's inner struggle of whether to create or to destroy.
Very profound and well written about a terrible involvement America is in. Good job and keep up the good work.
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