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AGE: 38
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 22

Hello my name is Kaiden G. Stone I am an artist, writer and studying sem -proffessional photographer.
I also have two step-daughters who are 17 and 20 and I am a very proud step-father.

I am also a practising Buddhi…

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  Dark Warrior  -The Blessing -       Chapter One   Aaron turned to view a dark shadow in the far right corner. He wasn’t quite sure what it was, but it moved like a serpent that slithered down the wall. He grabbed a small pocket torch from his jacket that was hung on the bedroom door. The torch beam picked out the silhouetted form that now manifested itself as something nearly human. Aaron became suddenly disturbed by this shadowy demon from Hell&rsquo...
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Short Story / Polly Anne's Pony
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  She laid there fragile and angelic, with the features and pale complexion of a small white china doll. Her innocent face told her own story. Her shallow eyes and dark lines made those who came in close contact with her, very aware of her personal battle with cancer. Every evening, Polly watched shadows on the eggshell coloured walls, where she laid tired and exhausted in her hospital bed. As car head lights flashed past the windows, she imagined animals and bizarre creatures dancing ...
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In times of poverty we plead, in times of war, the dieing bleed. In times when the Third World is still suffering from famine. Who are we to judge, as they die by their millions? On news broadcasts, we see the true horrors of fear, but no one shed’s a single tear Through the eyes of the media, we are given false and twisted information, as the politician’s deceive an entire nation. Homeless people work in sweatshops tied to a machine, those chains that bind them are those of a sla...
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Non-fiction / The Window Boy
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The Window Boy Prologue   The stars shone in the night sky like millions of crystal eyes suspended in a liquid shroud. The cool air washed over everything, as the rain fell from the darkness freezing instantly as it hit the surface of the road the streams soon began to overflow. Arran awoke and looked out of the attic window, he had became aware of the on coming storm. Lightening erupted across the sky, dancing beyond the trees in the distance as it cast split second silhouettes of o...
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“There is a land called the ‘land of the rising sun’, a land of promise and passion.”   Where a single willow tree stands on a hill surrounded by miles of fresh green fields, the plantations there grow rice, which is harvested by the farmers that gather crops that it yields. In a land haunted by ghosts from the battle fields of the Shogun empire and violent warriors fought for the honor of family and heritage, there stands a tree growing in the...
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Screenplay / Once Upon part 9
Wow this si going pretty well my friend, keep this up. Have you thought about sending your screne play/ scripts off at all ??
Screenplay / Once Upon Part 5
Yes now I can see where you are going with this script, it's very *0's orianteted I think, I guess you have worked in this enviroment, as you display very detailed knowledge of this area of industry.
Can you tell me more about this piece also, is this a continous script ??
I like this part to please tell me more about this piece of work.
I really liked this . Please can you tell me more about this piece.