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AGE:
31
LOC: Tulsa, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 28
LOC: Tulsa, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 28
My name is Jacinto. I am from Louisiana currently residing in Tulsa, Ok. I am the mother of one. I enjoy singing, surfing the internet, spending time with family and friends, dancing, and of course writing.
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I am remembering a stolen kiss the gentle hands of my lover on my face i am remembering love untarnished and genuine I am remembering lingering cologne and a note scribbled on a brown paper bag I am remembering passion when my body was ravished and I was no longer a girl I remember the taste of salty tears When he cried in my arms as a child..... I am remembering him
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I know that I have unforgiveness in my heart that I need to deal with. I have gone down the list thinking that I am making progress until I look in the mirror every morning. How do you forgive when you are the perpetrator? I believe that is the very reason why my chest hurts and my body aches because I am always left alone with the person that my heart is trying its best to forgive.
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You are my gift in purple satin my favorite color and my favorite fabric You are my horizon Kissing the night goodbye on its lips of midnight blue and crushed velvet You are my red flames my fury, my fire.....my colors
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She be the lady with the pretty brown skin pretty brown eyes, and big pretty lips............ with an ugly soul There are shards of glass where heart used to be and I am looking at that woman in the mirror..... that woman be me.
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You definitely painted a vivid and clear picture for the reader. This story is intriguing beginning with the first line. It appears that you set out to create a time and place in the readers imagination that would not be forgotten. Cudos.
A good read that relives memories with grandfather. Makes the hospital a real place in the mind. A very interesting read. Not the typical essay. This is not something that most people write about. Strong setting that hold s its own.
this writing is a true affirmation of love and lust at first sight. The characters in this writing become real because of the excellent mental picture that is painted by the writer. Jason is a real life person to alot of us ladies so the description of him was refreshing. Matt is the man that we all wait for. Interesting piece. Good reading.
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