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AGE: 45
LOC: Agoura Hills, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 19

at the risk of offending those who don’t deserve it, and there are some, fuck this. it becomes another parking space. full of drivel and those with baseless views. i don’t mind offending those who do deserve it, a tiny satisfaction in an unequal world.




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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / about rhyme
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I have strong opinions on this. There is only one poem that I can think of that had rhyme that I felt was a real poem and not childish nonsense.     maggie and milly and molly and may went down to the beach (to play one day) and maggie discovered a shell that sang so sweetly she couldn't remember her troubles,and milly befriended a stranded star whose rays five languid fingers were; and molly was chased by a horrible thing which raced sideways while blowing bubbles:and may came home...
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You are frightened to lose what you have had. You are frightened because you are ill equipped to compete in a society where your skin does not hold the sway it has historically. You may actually need skills and intelligence. You are correct to be afraid. But you are still wrong in the world you want. It will cost too much to make sure everyone has the medical care they need. The truth of the matter is, it will only cost a fraction of what the war cost. A war that was waged, as even the most b...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / bullshit
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most people here, like everywhere, are bullshit. if you are convinced you are not, guess what, you definitely are. i will maintain a small presence here, for the number who are not bullshit. i'm ok with most of you not liking me, it's ok, i don't like you either. for those of you not satisfied here either, i prefer this site:  http://outsiderwriters.ning.com/
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Poetry / anathema
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long stretches of nothing i try to say the answer but the question what was it brightly dark relentlessly intricate half formed push ahead as if it had weight and lightness an end
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Poetry / untitled
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a beautiful tortured thing provokes false empathy i am beyond rage this is humanity after all
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Criticism / Journey To Equality
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Girls
i don't think you've thought through all of the complex issues that lead girls and women to seek attention in this way. there is insecurity, issues of abuse and neglect, all sorts of damage that a women may be dealing with as best she can and looking for a bit of comfort and affection to get her through a long dark night. of course this is not always the motivation, but don't judge when you don't know what a person is dealing with. there is also still (for god's sake will it ever end!) the ri...
i don't really have any criticism, so you can refund it. i just wanted to say that i was riveted and horrified from the time Steve's intentions became clear, when he showed up with the roses. i just got more horrified as things progressed, the deserted back roads, people realizing something was wrong but not stepping up, it just occurred to me, much like the movie Alpha Dog (which was really great and also a true story). i was sure you would end up being raped by this pig, and i was relieved ...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Overcoming Fear
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Dangerous Sense: Chapter 2
My color deepened as I blushed. speculation doesn't grow into the eyes. it can arise in the mind. suspicion can creep into the eyes. "sparking my instinctual state" - sparking an instinctual reaction would be better, but i'm not sure what instinctual reaction would be provoked from a frown. it needs to be clarified who is speaking and which person is not human. "What's it to ya?" didn't seem to fit. "Stop!" was a bit confusing coming after "I refuse to be bitten!", it is assumed to be coming ...