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AGE: 20
LOC: Fords, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 07

aaalright… i’ve been on urbis almost 2 and a half years now.. it seem severyone only views short stories and novel treatments.. i’m mainly into poetry/song lyrics etc… those two chapters i wrote for a novel i just winged…  

oh and like everyone, i have a myspace…

and i deleted it.

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Poetry / what a trip
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in dreams of madness i saw she had the scent of spring she knew my mind where i was from she had the life u can't buy and she's so high flaws she can't hide she would cry and want me by her side and then she died atleast to me i don't see you you don't see me what a fuckin' trip
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Poetry / what a trip
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in dreams of madness i saw she had the scent of spring she knew my mind where i was from she had the life u can't buy and she's so high flaws she can't hide she would cry and want me by her side and then she died atleast to me i don't see you you don't see me what a fuckin' trip
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surprise death to the opposite take his fucking seat room to breathe, room to eat victory
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Poetry / the clocks
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"questioning yourself you're left your own witness give it time to run by like clockwork you're breaking down with each pass" at half-past six thought you had it as a fix instead you're losing tick with each minute, you don't fit you're losing yourself with each hour that you sit give it time to run by or open up and look inside something's not right here.
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Lyrics / On the Bridge
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when you see me on the bridge dont snuff me out just gimme ridge i'm your best piece of advice with this conflict the struggle of choice between a well rounded life or that of masturbation clarity its closing us in its such a sin i have to admit i seek verity when you see me on the bridge dont knock me out just let me spin i'm the best friend you have in this darkness when you see me on the other side we'll lay our guns and let it ride i'll give myself to you when we die because we both don't...
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wow.. you have serious skill with words.. rhyming as many as four words together.. while most people would sacrifice quality and power of words with heavy rhyme.. you only make the words more powerful.. my favorite line would have to be "to tantalize me with precious preachings of pronounced prose". you've inspired me to write something similar.. im slightly confused with the ending.. however as i read it over i realize it talks about how your love and muse may have left.. but another may com...
Poetry / In Love
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i like it alot. its very eduational. it gives me a new understanding of this disease witha ll the detail given. this is written from a male perspective and i must say you have seriously moved me though i can never know what your pain is like. the way you feel about this i can relate to my point of view. i also know the feeling of having a long-term diesase, having to take pills that make you sick as hell... it is concluded very well. awesome job.
Quotes / Old Tape
very true... perhaps that you shouldn't do the same as someone else did before you?
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