smellycorpse's profile

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AGE: 15
LOC: Nashville, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 19

My name is Smellycorpse and I am a girl that loves to write. I am thirteen.
Alot of my poetry is angry and some disturbing, but that’s just the way I am. These poems are only how I feel at the moment.

Writing is my life. I would very much appreciate if you guys left me some reviews on my work, telling me what I can improve and stuff.

As you can probably tell, I can’t spell worth a flip. I know that isn’t good for a writer, so I will work on that. lol

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Criticism / Why do you hate me
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Well I just got like 5 freaking emails saying that I have gone against urbis guidelines. what the hell? I left a comment on a writing called Lifes a bitch. my comment was: you're right, life is a bitch. I also left another comment on another poem. I said "I liked the way you turned something so simple into something fun and inretresting." So is that a problem. They said that I should be more of a critique. Alrighty, I'll be a critiqe. Yo mother fucker your writings fucking suck man get a fuck...
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Poetry / Time
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I didn’t realize that time had flown by me. I have to look at a career next year, but math is still my biggest fear. Cannibal corpse is my savor and Shakespeare is still my enemy. So what am I to do? I still carry around my phone like a dog; I wear dark makeup to make me look mysterious. I think candy is wondrous. I’ll never survive in the real world. So I put my ear phones in, turn up the Blue October song. I close my eyes, and tell myself to shut up. I have my friends going through the same...
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Stop it Stop it right now With your fucking mind games Degrading me Hating me Killing me Stop Stop it right now I have too much to do I don't need you You think you can use me; control me like a puppet Stop Stop it right now! You’re wrong You just use me for your own sick entertainment It's slowly killing me The stabs in my back Are beginning to bleed I can't handle this any longer Can't you see?! Stop Stop it right now! I have too much to deal with I don't need you! Oh god the pressure build...
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Sunshine makes me blue Sometimes I wish I could see you I shouldn’t do what I do I sit forever wanting for you But I keep getting rejected and neglected Man I hate the sunshine It reminds me of you. The rain is my savor The one I look forward to The smell, the taste, the flavor I love the rain One day I wish to fly into the sky. Shoot down the beams of light that you cast upon me Because those beams blind me So I can’t see what I’m doing that makes you hurt so bad I clinch my eyes together. T...
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Poetry / Sister
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Sister I still am here where you left me. Someone has taken you away. Perhaps god…..no Sister Sometimes I see you dancing around Playing with Barbies and being a kid Everyone says it’s a hallucination….no Sister You still hold a place deep within my heart. A stranger left flowers on your grave today That shows that people still remember Sister I want to hold your hand again I’m so tired of being an only child Why did this happen to you? Sister Remember me And I’ll remember you
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Non-fiction / Let's be Fair
Katrina was a very horrible Incident. Some people may find this writing wrong, but I think this writing brings out great points.
cool reminds me of runescape.
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very deep. It was also very good. I liked it.
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