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LOC: Philadelphia, PA
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One I can’t believe I let Tracy fix me up on a date with another one of Daran’s friends. The last date Tracy fixed me up on was a disaster. This guy named Raymond but preferred to be called (Ray-Ray). He was about ‘5, 4’ and had a mouth full of gold fronts; he looked like a retired pimp. Raymond or should I say (Ray-Ray) took me to a matinee because he didn’t want to pay full price for a movie. In the theater he spent the whole time trying to grab my tits and kiss on me. I was so irritated by...
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It was a nice read. It was very intresting to see how you gave the dog human like features. Besides the minor typos this is a really good childrens story. I would encourage you tp keep writing. With everything practice makes perfect. I love Abby. She is so full of energy. I wanted to get a dog just from reading this story.
this was the best short story i hsve read in a long time. it held my attention and i oved tha the bully got his by a girl. you can for sure become published. you seem to be very seasoned already. i look forward to reading more of your work.
This was a good short read.I'm not familiar with poker but I would've wanted to win more than a beer. Keep up the good work.
this play was very boring, sail boating as the plot that was boring. i would suggest you put a little acton into this. try again.
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