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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 18
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 18
These pieces are simple for others to read. I don’t want to try and make any money from them, so they will never be published.
Generally I have been writing for many years and have built up a huge pile of stories. This is the only way they will ever live in the imagination of others. So I submit my works to be reviewed, not to be given a little life before they disappear forever. Steve.
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Synopsis: Lottery Dreams Lottery Dreams is the title of a novel I’m thinking of publishing on this site. If you want to know more, please stay tuned. Steve. This is the story of a group of simple working class men who win the lottery. You follow them on their adventure through the hell of factory life, with its crushing boredom, to the heady heights of having more money than they can spend. Throughout all this lurks the sinister figures who really run the world, granting the men their fortune...
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WORKING TITLE: MISSING WIFE Ten years later there she was. I was sitting at the hotel bar when I saw her. The hotel was a good one, in a small market town in the East Midlands called Stamford. The only reason I stop to think about the location, is due to the irony of it. I had lived here since my early childhood, and went to school nearby.Over the years I have travelled all over the world, but always to come back and settle once again in England. Eventually, I come back to in Stamford. As I ...
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Love has no programme or set of rules. You cannot quantify what will or will not happen. In my modest opinion all you can do if celebrate the fact that you are at least capable of loving someone that intensely. I know its small comfort but I think all experiences are sent to test us. Steve
What can you say? It would be too obvious to suggest that you find the middle way. Because clearly life throws too many obstacles up to meet you. Alistair Crowley always thought that no amount of excess went too far when it came to gaining experiences to enrich your life. But even too much self reflection can be a trip in the wrong direction.
What a heart churning story! I felt I was there amongst the blood and gore. You certainly captured the terror of such a world, even drumming up some sympathy for such a terrible character. The scenes you painted of the streets of Paris were very vivid and a wonderful backdrop to the story. The bleak lives of the people were very well woven into the tale. Well done. Steve
Very Good! I loved this story and can’t believe you got a rough ride for anything you wrote in the past. Although the story went well, I couldn’t help but think that Brock should have grown up a little and realised he was just getting himself in too deep. But then I guess that was the position of the story. I can see that what you were getting at was altruism in a divided society, and people trying to identify themselves within it. Most stories have to take the position of the individual on t...
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