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AGE:
32
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 07
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 07
About theslackrabbit
.. .. 29, Primary school teacher, London. Writes and records in home studio. Genuine guy. I love reading and writing about life, but i love living it more. Open minded, but principled. Adventurous but not reckless. Sensitive, but not needy. Not scared to cry, but enjoy laughing a whole lot more. (vegetarian) Like most people im a walking contradiction: I am open to new ideas but fairly stubborn. I enjoy stimulating conversations, but laugh at toilet humour. I quit smoking at the start of the year, but wonder how long it will last? I rarely drink, but when i do i make up for lost time! I am sceptical of everything, but trust too easily. Sometimes I look at the world in wondrous amazement; the variety and contrast it…
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(Not so) Young, free and single. Newton's Third Law of Motion states that: For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. So, if (for example) I get off a boat and step onto the shore, the boat will move in the opposite direction and I stand a good chance of getting wet. Similarly, if I were to be say, CRUELLY AND HORRIBLY DUMPED by, oh I dont know: a COMPLETE BITCH! the universe will surely have to react in an equal and opposite fashion. In other words Im almost certainly about to...
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The grieving process. Part one – Feeling sick! It’s like that feeling you get when you're driving to work and you can’t remember if you've left the iron on or not? It’s like being told you're inadequate, unattractive and bad in bed all at the same time! It’s like being repeatedly kicked when you're already on the ground and you just want to close your eyes until the bullies go away... It’s like wanting everything that you know you can never have and wanting to be everything you know you can n...
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The grieving process. Part one – Feeling sick! It’s like that feeling you get when you're driving to work and you can’t remember if you've left the iron on or not? It’s like being told you're inadequate, unattractive and bad in bed all at the same time! It’s like being kicked when you're already on the ground and you just want to close your eyes until the bullies go away... It’s like wanting everything that you know you can never have and wanting to be everything you know you can never be......
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Too many "heart" references in lines 4,5 and 6. Change that and i think that youre on to a winner.
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Are you really 17? This piece is written extremely well. If i had one criticism, it would be that you seem to be trying too hard- Almost every sentence is a complex sentence and so lacks variation in stylistic tempo. hope this helps?
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