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AGE:
19
LOC: Ridgecrest, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 10
LOC: Ridgecrest, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 10
Hey I’m Cassy. I’ve been writting for I don’t even know how long. I’m a senior in high school.
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A shiny, black beetle scuttled across the linoleum flooring at an alarming pace flailing its legs as quickly as it could; it was in open territory and needed even the smallest amount of a refuge that it could find. Then, there it was. A shadow caused by an industrial sized metal shelf appeared ahead, so the beetle made a mad dash into hiding. Unfortunately for the beetle, however, Tilly Montreau, a precocious child of six, was watching its every move. Before the bug could escape from her gaz...
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Dreams and ambitions smiles and cries, fights and lies all we shared I was yours and you were mine. Heaven on Earth, seems like just a moment in time a dream, ended all too soon your caress and gentle fitness, what I miss but my heart still beats on. Yearning for a memory that's dead and gone I've been branded, the walking time bomb but this is not the was its suppose to end in my mind you are gone for good but in my heart, you are still my only one. The one who could bring me to my knees and...
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I was sitting here thinking of words I want to say but they wouldn't come out right so I found a different way. I got out a piece of paper and I wrote this poem for you but there is no way to thank you for everything you do. For always being nice and staying by my side, for helping me fix my problems and never leaving me behind. For accepting my thoughts and feelings, although sometimes you don't understand, for never giving up on me and always being my friend. For making me laugh and lettin...
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So many questions so little time sometimes I ask am I losing my mind? So many decisions I know I can't make so much criticism I simply won't take. I can't please everyone but I always try sometimes I get discouraged but I don't know why. I hate all the pressures that are brought upon me to many decisions then I'd rather there be. I can't stand it, I don't know what to do to feel what I feel if only you knew. I'm not looking for sympathy I just wish it would end but I feel its a battle that I'...
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Smile is what they say. It will make your troubles go away. No one will even have to know that you are hurt. If a smile is plastered in place it will erase. Only deep down will you feel it. Gathering every time in the pit…. The bottom of the bottle it will go. Just suck it up and let life flow. But that’s what they say. It’s like you locked all your anger away. You feel it grow every day. People you love don’t even know. That the bottle shoved full of hate is going to explode Red is all you w...
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This does help and i'm sure has helped some other people too. Basically no one is born to write they just learn as they grow older. This piece was nicely written, but from another writers point of view which is better. This would be a good "short story" for someone to read before they go to publish one of their works.
This is a depressing piece yet with a samewhat happy ending. It all flows together which is good and over I think this piece is nicely written.
Is poem is very nice just needs a few changes Line 6 Make you cry then make you laugh ...add in and Line 8:But starts deep inside me..maybe but deep down inside These could just be typos. but other than that I think is poem is nicely written.
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