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LOC: Nevada City, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 06
LOC: Nevada City, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 06
How do you sum up that line in just one paragraph?...you cant…and i dont intend to try. But i will say this,picture if you will a normal 16yr old who just wants to live to see his face on a drivers liscense. now add in some punk rock,a bad hair day,way to many mella drama movies,and you will come out with something similar to me. I am a blend of many things emotions,actions,backrounds,i have a wide range. There is little that i exel at, and the things i do exel at do not matter to the outside world. I am optimistic about life yet pesimistic about my life. I say what i mean,unless its important. I am the only Oxymoron that makes sence,and my Chicken soup is not good for the teenage soul. I act,yet i stumble throught the role of my life….
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I had a nightmare last night, except the thing was, the nightmare was real. It happened. I don’t know exactly what that means, when a nightmare is as real as the event that happens, but somehow I believe it to be a bad sign. There’s no hidden agenda, your minds not playing tricks on you. It’s just your memories playing over and over like a broken projector, and it never changes. I see myself there in the doorway, .22 in hand, then I see the pictures on the walls, the target, his wife, and hi...
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Prologue Yep it’s broken. Aint a doctor in the world who would tell me differently right now. There’s no blood but the numbness and lack of pain at seeing this white bone sticking out of my leg has got me sure that its broken. Wonder when the pain will kick in? Minute? Two? Could it possibly be longer than that, soon as I put weight on it I know I’m in for a world of hurt. Maybe its best if I just lie here, till the pain comes, or someone else does. Carson’s eyes fluttered open and then shut...
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She said as she laughed in my face, "never give love a chance just live with this suicide romance what is the purpose of giving up your ground when you've fallen so far that you can't be found." Then she walked away Then she ran away.... Well push me to the edge Better to stumble and fall Than to have never loved at all Take this one chance with me Step to wind and lets see if we can break free From our misery. And I see all the fears you ever new Your heart beaten black and blue The reason y...
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He took you on the ride of your life then dropped by side of the rode holding the murder knife your love for him as tall as the highest tower of Rome now the city lays in ruins hes not coming home all rodes lead to your broken heart he left here to walk the green mile your perfect features weary with denial Once a queen now just a ghost he took away what you needed most this burning city alight with flame his poison lips said you were to blame your never ending story ended before it ever bec...
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There is a pretty lady walking down the street Gotta say something quick before she passes me by. How about nice feet? That's all I can think of as she goes walking down the street Not going to say that…no no no I cant It might be perverted, it just might be freaky. Besides now that I think about it her feet look quite stinky. I may be neurotic but those feet Those feet are not hypnotic. Pretty Pretty Pretty Pretty lady what do I say If I talk about that Prada handbag You might just find me g...
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this creates a beautiful image, one taht many of us strive for, and i appluad you for relating to that, i would recomend though changing around the pattern of the words, because when read aloud it gives off a sing songy type of voice, which i belive is brought on by each sentence having the same structure.
beautiful. i think it is safe to call this a complete original piece of work. One that is not muddled in meaning with overly dramatic catch phrases or hard core lyrics. It's new and it's fresh. One thing i did spot out though, i think your meaning was a bit crippled by the simple rhyming scheme you gave yourself, i feel alot more could be said with a lot more meaningful words, if you broke free of that sequence.
short word answers only have deep impact in movies. one word cannot really exprese an opinion on something. you can say "its good" but then that brings up questions like, "why is it good". if you remember that someone will actually be reading your review you will find that it is best to describe/analyise as much of the story as you can.
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