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AGE: 52
LOC: Tucson, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 28

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12 Reviews   15 Comments
My Blue -Tic Rocky Mountain hound does not know how to frown. Her tongue dangles around she is such a clown. My "Southern Belle" hound loves to go to town. Up in my truck she's found not a sleep on the ground. She did not come from the pound where its bleak and brown. She is my Blue -Tic hound she is so profound. I so love my hound I will never let her down. She will always be found With her tongue dangling around. She is my Blue-Tic Rocky Mountain Hound!
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12 Reviews   17 Comments
He has a reassuring grin and a benevolent way to show you how to get on with your day. He lets you try but will not let you cry Yes, he will continue to be by your side. Knowing he is there showing that he cares you follow him like the air circling through his hair. What greater gift than having a friend who lifts you up, so you will not despair. Now you can relax in mid-air. Knowing no collisions will come that he will not share. So, by now you know he is forever there!
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Poetry / Fate's Answer
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12 Reviews   11 Comments
Fate fading away for just a short period. Fate coming back laughing taunting throwing the pain at me again. The faithful Gods did answer showed kindness entwined with destiny that Fate would be back. Retuning laughing taunting slowly shoving its pain right into its place .
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Poetry / Fate
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12 Reviews   17 Comments
Fate taunting laughing over the years slams in to you when you least expect it. Pain-sharp, biting as the freezing winds clings to your heart. Yesterday laughing its way down the road. When will the God's of fate turn towards kindness and bend just a little my way? Is that to much to ask? Has too many years past to turn the tide... falling up stream in to my life? Fate does not have any understanding of feelings...deep... its always just on the surface -taunting -laughing -slamming into my li...
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12 Reviews   10 Comments
Whirlpool of Sadness A lover drifting down stream in a river Strong currents trying to force him back up stream into the arms of a burning ember forged from a love of long ago, caught inside a whirlpool of emotional turmoil. Not wanting to break free circling deeper than she should and catching her breath, but sensing dispare within, forces out an extended hand holding the precious burning ember which signals for one last embrace of a dream only the God’s of the future can tell. The burning e...
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These six words just hit me right on,and spoken with intelligence, but not with an overwhelming desire for greed. A visual picture erupts immediately inside of my mind. Although this can be taken literally,like a homeless person who does Urbis at a public library,and saw this opportunity; or someone who has a home with a computer and thoughtfully decided to write this description. Either way, I was very impressed with this personal quote.
Short Story / Separate Lives
Locked
I kept wondering through the lyrics if he would ever release her and stop calling. The sadness is very apparent in this female. Why doesn't she tell him off in one of the lyrics like at the end of the song? Sounds to me like he deserves it. This would be m y only suggestion. I really liked your lyrics. Keep going !
Lyrics / All I had done
The crystal makes me think that the sun's rays are trying to purify him of his guilt. Yet he doesn't understand the crystals purpose as he cries out for "absolution please. " Lyrics four is a bit too long. I like the imagery especially under the red sky. The word tide doesn't make sense to me. I think of an oceans's huge wave coming towards him, which of course is ironic considering he is roaming in the desert. I suppose he could think it was, since people do have mirages in the desert. I lik...
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Twisted Oak- Chapter Four
When she comes to the law office state that she didn't get invited into the reception area or just entering the office. When they were talking I had the picture she was inside the building. I went back to read this section, in order to understand the through description of the inactivity you described in later paragraphs. This sentence ,"The lock caught, then released and the door flew open against my weight." I wondered how realist this would be? Could a previous statement about having troub...
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