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AGE: 24
LOC: LA, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 07

What is there to say? I write what ever inspires me. Could I ever be deep? Who knows.

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Poetry / Needy
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Clutch me in your arms Squeeze me like you haven't seen me for eternity Puncture my lungs Take my breath away This is how I want you to feel after being gone so far away Don't look at me with disdain eyes Aloof because you don't want me like I Renounce me from your heart Worlds crumble apart Leaving behind the debris of love forlorn Open my heart Dive inside Drown in the stream so you can radiate and die Flowing in my veins Losing control Want you with me wherever I go Don't look at me with d...
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Poetry / In Her Eyes
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She never saw me in her eyes Only the object of her affection where love was torn Causing my butterfly heart to slowly flutter into oblivion As she rapts her mind on a love that can no longer resuscitate - While pouring her lachymal eyes through this solemn requiem - Her lips grew pale against mine in hopes she could fill the open manhole she calls her heart while Burying it with my arms to cleanse any memory that would bring distraught But its clear to me that I am only covering what is undy...
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Poetry / Heart Eater
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Serving it straight to my hand without forks and knives, I ate her heart like how someone ate mine Like an apple, her body's core rot Then spoil with anguish her lips expressed But broken, like her emotions, she tries to hide and suppress Aloof without a heart, so she becomes a zombie just like me, Thirsting the shelter of apathy Her glass heart broke undeservingly into pieces from the abuse of my mouth Yet she still love me
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Poetry / Punch Drunk Love
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You and me belong together In a swimming pool swimming in your intoxicating essence Then mend to heal my heart temporarily in your distilled incense When I'm with you, Sometimes I feel happy Other times I feel blue But then I'm rejuvenated when I consume that smooth kiss from you Let it flow through my system My vision obscured Promiscuity aroses while shyness disparage Then the world becomes a vertigo ride aas I tumble And stumble into your arms to pick me up Kiss me again to blacken my visi...
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There's nothing I want more from u but to be more than friends Ur radiating with your smile and can control me with your eyes U can stimulate and elevate my mind to a high where weed and cocaine can't reach To where I can't imagine a day not conversing with u Ur as true as poetry; pure like God Real like diamonds but not tainted like u came from Sierra Leone I thank God and heaven for blessing u into my life I hope that our love will live until we, both, die Then get perserved 'til we both sp...
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Poetry / Gone Away
I liked this peace because it seems that is presenting a loss of humility. Like in the third stanza where you state, "Endless miles I've walked into the rising in the sun what kept me from pulling the trigger on the gun..." That really intrigued me and made me feel some connectedness with the poem. Keep up the good work and please read/ commment some of my work also.
Poetry / Royalty
I am intrigue to know what you're poem is about. I liked it, it was great piece you've created. The imagery was clever and the metaphors is ingenious. If you could comment back, I would like to know what inspired you and what brought you to write it in the fashion of the medievil figures.
This poem was alright. It wasn't good, it wasn't bad. It was ok. I think it could have been a little bit more passion or words that express more passion of the restlessness that you feel. That's about it but just keep working on it.
Poetry / As Angels Fall
I like this poem because it really expresses emotion to it. I liked your imagery but the one thing i felt that was out of place was the part where you put, "His blood still seeps through the cracks of the grave." That was a little out of place for me but overall the rest of the poem is good and i like it very much.
This was really like whatever to me. I didn't really like it, I thought it could of been a little bit better. I think what it lacked was an attention getter; if you had words that caught my attention, it probably would have been better. Also I noticed that there were some misspellings, I think that also contributed to the problem; if there were less misspelled words then this would have been better.
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