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Quotes / Truth
Version 1
21 Reviews   16 Comments
My heart's overflow is in writing.
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Opportunities
Haiku/Senryu / Coming to You
Version 2
23 Reviews   13 Comments
I breathed in your breath introduced my heart to you sharing ignited Exhaling in kiss you taste my desire for you sharing perfected Bodies transported life connections formed and sealed sharing transcended
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Haiku/Senryu / Comming to You
Version 1
6 Reviews   2 Comments
I breathed in your breath introduced my heart to you sharing most basic Exhaling in kiss you taste my desire for you sharing perfected Bodies transported life connections formed and sealed sharing transcended
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Haiku/Senryu / Who am i
Version 2
19 Reviews   8 Comments
To say who i am will open myself to you shall you come inside? I am an old soul inhabiting old body with spirit of youth. within me is peace i have heard the voice of god painfully joyous. I but sum of parts each thought extension of self attains it's own life. I have love for all my insight sees depth of you demands disclosure knowledge fulfills me assimilation of soul birth of new spirit lighthearted laughter effervescent silliness sarcastic pundit when you look at me enlightened and lunati...
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Haiku/Senryu / Who am i
Version 1
7 Reviews   4 Comments
To say who i am is to open myself to you will you come inside? I am an old soul inhabiting old body with spirit of youth. within me is peace i have heard the voice of god painfully joyous. I but sum of parts each thought extension of self attains it's own life. I have love for all my insight sees depth of you demands disclosure knowledge fulfills me assimilation of soul birth of new spirit lighthearted laughter effervescent silliness sarcastic pundit when you look at me enlightened and lunati...
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Haiku/Senryu / Immigrant
Version 1
44 Reviews   53 Comments
My family starves. There is no work for me here. How can we survive? Invisible line I think you can't refuse me. I take so little. Hope lies in plenty. Although I am not with them, My family smiles. How can you not share When I find in your refuse An honest living? I feel your anger. My poverty threatens you, Causing discomfort. You need not fear me. I do not want to take yours. I just want my own. Opportunity; It's all I really ask for. I'm not a beggar.
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Haiku/Senryu / Savor
Version 1
42 Reviews   44 Comments
Soft champagne mornings Bubbles tickle me awake Happy beginning. Mid-day chardonay Blossoms into lovely day Focused, but gentle. Sangria evenings mixed flavors drawn from the day Satisfy the Id. Night-warming cognac Stretches both my mind and soul Drifts in peaceful rest. Wine tempers vision Cycles of life are aging. Full-bodied richness.
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Haiku/Senryu / Self-inflicted Ennui
Version 5
41 Reviews   51 Comments
I thought communion required two souls for sharing. I commune alone. Sometimes I hear you. I think sometimes you hear me, But they aren’t shared thoughts. I speak of joys. You talk to me of illness. We lack translation. If my soul is well Why show me failing bodies? Do you doubt me too? Seeking does not work. I look for reassurance You give me questions. I want mystical Your offering is mundane. I expect too much. Clairification. Do I evoke your ennui? You expect too much. Not mysticism. Neit...
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Haiku/Senryu / Children
Version 2
42 Reviews   29 Comments
Babies cannot know whose harps of heartstrings they pluck When first they are born. You touch my music and give it a master's stroke. I am your student. My virtuoso. My heart is your instrument Fine tune it at will.
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