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AGE: 23
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 27

Alright, Yeah not bad, yourself?

i’m sean.
i’m 21 years old.
i’m from the u.k (we used to run the world before we gave it all back!!).

when i was a younger man (14 or so) i really wanted to go to university and become a talented and inspiring writer… Then i found out about snowboarding!

www.soulsports.co.uk/seanmiller

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Consolations and apologies Can never replace the purity Of the honest heart I’m about to break. I fear her tears will be gruesome, (I sigh) For the repercussions that are due Will be far worse than salty flakes. oh well! Perhaps if I wasn't so lonely, I wouldn't have need to lead her on. If I wasn't so contorted and Twisted, I wouldn't chuckle and smile And have to hide my inner delight/fun. So what to say to the naive heart I am about to break? Sorry is far to cliché.... and I’m not. Maybe s...
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Each morrow my sunlight sets to sorrow My enthusiasm dies and my soul crushed. Attendance is required at the wretched workhouse. The supervisor glorified slave driver Pressures his demands, like the world's gonna end All because of papers filed incorrectly? Hate, loathe and detest pave and pay the way, As we all save for rainy days. I dream of making gravy in the rain (Ironically moribund and mundane!) Please no more comedy ties and do something before you die, See a bigger picture, Not the s...
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My poor swollen knees ache and pain and agitate, My fragile soul gets contorted, barely can i concentrate. The standard raises each year... how can I keep a place??? i must be brave and bold, i must rehabilitate. As this new fall approaches, i am again a wreck of nervousness, i want and expect the world, i will expect NO less. All cameras must focus, capture my every flight, This is too important a year for me to make a mess.
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For some reason i just can't place this poem being written in the late 80's/ early 90's! I'd have thought that it would be a great time to grow up... the smiths, nirvana, Baywatch!! I think that this poem has more reliance today than it ever had back when you first wrote it. 'A Shakespearean tragedy', conjures up too many Romeo and Juliet images for me. 'Latte dreams' I’m not too fond of, because common sense tells you caffeine keeps you up, if how ever it's a reference to starbucks and other...
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Pure class poem mate. I bet loads of people find it easy to identify with this, so nice one for picking a good social vibe to write about. I don't want to be critical as I can see that you have put some time and effort into this poem, but I think it could read easier. I don't think open verse is the best way to structure this poem. Call me traditional, but i prefer structure as it allows more rhythm for the poem, this I think will make it flow better. Also 'dentist' would be better with an ex...
UURRRGGHH ITS WELL CLINGY!!! I like the idea though, but I can also see what you mean about the structure. I also am pretty new to this game and only write for a outburst! I reckon the best way to make it more easy to read is to separate your ideas. For instance set it like a story, have your original concept as your introduction i.e. I am your mate etc. and have that as one stanza. I’d also try and break up the other two of the ideas into separate verse/stanza. So, 'Take me everywhere' as a ...
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10 out of 10! I can totally identify with this poem (I have actually just submitted one on the same sort of line!). This is a great poem about pressure and the want and need to succeed and the escapism music can provide. Also I love the idea about what pressures and scares you also sets you free and gives you the buzz that makes it all worth while. 'Her life' and 'pressure of the pedal' link sublimely together, really creating the frustration and joy given by the piano. I also really liked 'b...
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My first reaction is that i don't get it... It all seems really loved up to me, as if the poem speaks of the infatuation of resounding beauty/intellect. "Sonnet Marie’s" voice seems a prominent theme. All I can muster about this poem is that the writer likes "Sonnet Marie's" poetical expressions and style. I like how 'raven strands' stands out from the poem, sounds kind of spiky in an otherwise smooth flowing poem. I think its really good imagery about hair, but I prefer 'ebony windows' to be...
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