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AGE: 18
LOC: Santee, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 03

hi! my name is courtney and i’m 15. i live in california and i love writing. short stories are my specialty, but i also write poetry. regarding poetry though, i mostly just appreciate it.
i love criticism because i am a perfectionist.

thanks for taking the time to look me up!

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Poetry / Forgetting
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Sunshine fills my eyes As I awaken In my bed, In my room My first thought is sheer joy I am yours, You are mine But then I remember That's the worst part Forgetting and having to remember again My mind flashes back to the night before You said there was someone else And showed me her picture I told you she was pretty and I was happy for you I meant what I said This morning I still do Even though I miss you so much With the memory gone, I look again to the sunshine Take a deep breath And start...
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Poetry / It Seemed minor
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it's hard to watch you go your pain must be unbearable i understand it was your decision and i support you all the way but it doesn't make losing you any easier remember the time we spent together i love the memories i miss you already even while you're sick you smile and call me beautiful you know just what to say to make me smile inside your illness seems minor because you make it seem that way but it's not it's taking you away forever i'm trying to be brave but it's hard seeing you wince e...
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Poetry / Beary
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Cuddly, soft, and white Discarded and picked up again By me A young girl looking for a friend Beary- a name given to you out of Love When I am angry So are you When I am sad So are you The only piece of my parents Together Now apart, They hate each other Only her Not him here I am sad But you take that Away When I look at you I remember How it was before Beary- a name given to you out of love By a young girl Looking for a friend
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Short Story / The Bed
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Click, click, click go the needles as they weave in and out of the baby blanket I’m knitting. Seven months pregnant, I’m beginning to get anxious about the birth of my baby girl. I’ve decided to name her Katherine, after my boyfriend’s mother. She’s been so sweet to me, especially since finding out about the baby. I met my boyfriend, Aidan, about a year and a half ago. A friend set us up on a blind date and we really took a liking to each other. We have been dating ever since. We are perfect...
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Short Story / My Saviors
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What am I doing? I think as I become aware of how fast my feet are hitting the rain spattered pavement. Jay’s. I’m going to Jay’s. The street names fly by as I twist and turn following the sidewalk. I’ve been to Jay’s so many times over the past two years; I could walk here with my eyes closed. I’ve been with Jay for a year, since I was fifteen and he was eighteen, but we were friends for a year before that. Jay will make everything okay. I smile for a second as I approach his house. It’s li...
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Poetry / Theatres
i like the way you capitalized it, but i would uncapitalize your last line "live in these spaces." i really like your description of the beauty you notice. this poem is great.
Poetry / Sick
this is really dark and morbid. at least the idea is. your language could be better suited accordingly. you could make it more in poem form too.
i think this a really good start, but it needs more. i noticed the part one in the title so i do hope you add to it. it seems a bit rushed. maybe that's what you are trying to do; that's how the dog looks at things, but it could use a bit more descriptions. it is a very good start though and i hope you get published. you're on your way to being good enough.
i liked this a lot. it was real and raw. i could tell that it was something that happened to you that you weren't too pleased about. i enjoy your writing very much. it's professional but not so polished it looks like a computer could have written it. i must be honest; the end lost me. i'm not sure what the relaionship is between the two characters in the story. throughout it, i get he feeling they are a couple, but then the narrator says he has kids. i could handle a bit more description in t...
Non-fiction / mary's eyes
wow i can't even tell you how beautiful this is. your words are soo descriptive and you know exactly how to use them. "Her eyes were revelations, opening up the secrets of a thousand millennia." that's my favorite sentence. i can't believe that you don't write more often. you're very good at it.
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