sagittarius1212's profile
AGE:
42
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 06
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 06
I have many passions including the ocean, SCUBA, exploring: the outdoors, the unknown, ancient civilizations and the paranormal. However, my number one passion in life is MUSIC. I have been writing poems and lyrics since I was twelve years old and have received four monthly “Editor’s Choice” awards and nominations for many more.
Thought I would try it out here and see what kind of reviews I get, as well as, review others.
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(Hook) Always the same, your charming ways, words you say. No, it never changes, You alwayyyysss get your prey. (chorus) whomever you set your sights on tonight you know is yours, they never put up a fight so entranced, are they, so quickly, fall prey hells spell for you and your demonic way Watching you is like learning from a master. Poor little girls intent on playing with disaster. They know not, what demon stands before them. Eyes barely focused on this, star st...
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Like, lust, love; humiliate, hurt, hate.
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I am passionate. There is one thing I love most. Music holds the key.
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Guitars, drums and lyrics; my passions.
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Promises of things to come. Words spoken can't be undone. The emptiness of it all. Heading for the most tragic fall. Each days dawn. Realization, I'm just a pawn. Suffocating madness lies ahead. Out of every orifice, I have bled. Deaf ears and blank stares. Oblivious to all who care? All this have I become? Deserving to be so lonesome? Choices I have made. Might as well, be in my grave. Don't know how or where to start, Dark emptiness invades my heart. "See yo...
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This is a good poem in my opinion... the imagery and clarity are unmistakeable. The flow os off a little.. for example on line 4 you might consider shortening it a little to something like: "but all they do is turn away" it flows a little better ... same thing with line 8, consider something like. "spare change would show they care" you get the idea... good poem over all though. Donna
I really like it. The imagery and clarity are very good, as is, the flow and theme. I don't think I would change anything. Great job!! Donna
Very sad ...but, also good. The imagery is very good, as is, the clarity. In my opinion you could expand on it some and make it fantastic. Donna
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