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AGE: 29
LOC: Bakersfield, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 15

I am 27 about to turn 28, and I’ve been writing since I could hold a pencil, its my only medium, my outlet, a way to let the world know what is viewed through these eyes, I hope to learn and to grow on here and I’m looking forward to the experience.

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Poetry / Paying the debt.
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Sought in the night, pitch, cold and black, Surrounding wails strung against the walls, Life fading in finding recourse to steal back, The pain of watching as all crumbles and falls. Lying deep in the minds endless void, Spasms indulgent and oft regretted, Hearts sullen in response to with being toyed, In searching for the light to feel indebted. As the shroud of a pale moon rises high against the plain, The insanity of the abyss takes all it desires, And realization that the pursuit has bee...
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Poetry / First Times
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The first time I saw the sun I saw the face of God, Alive in the light of the endless horizon, The first time I heard music I felt the peace of the world, Sounding soft melodies lost in time, The first time I touched the sky I found the wonders of all, Living inside faded memories, The first time I cried the pain of the world weighed in my soul, And comfort there was held in sweet relief, The first time my tonuge held mint I knew what it was to smile, And find calm in natures simple sweetnes...
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Poetry / Journey
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As sand falls slowly through a painted glass, My mind awakens with images of true wonder, That which the damaged and the wounded surpass, Mimicking the wails of pounding thunder. As I sit with a gaze of harden steel, Watching scenes of a life that is lost, The pain inside reminds me how to feel, What is found comes with the greatest of costs. Living in a world of ceaseless noise, Battering down the walls within, Mindlessly watching a pond full of coys, Not knowing where to go or begin. The p...
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Out of darkness all the times past are seen, Undaunted by the weight they hold, In a lifetime specked with the sin of the forgotten, Being able to hold only to that which is cold, Unable to voice what pain is felt, By jerring voices of the mob, And finding no peace there, Invisible and unheard in relesing softest sob. The absence of that others so easily find, Brings to mind rings of the darkening world, Grasping for unmingled kindness, Striving for the standards to be unfurled. Though in th...
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Poetry / The Gift of You
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As sand settles on a sea of dunes, And the skies rise in splendid glory, A man's life is reduced to faded memories, Still alive with the air of our story. To live in the world of untempered love, And find the peace so Longley sought, The breath of all stands fierce on the brink, To stay in a place of which we so tenderly fought. My mind sees all the things made possible, By living at your side, From there the birth of all hope springs, Surviving the blast when our worlds collide. Forever in m...
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Poetry / It's Nothing
Very nice, stark, atmospheric, good use of langauage to add to the overall effect. Nice imagery and good flow. Really a very nice piece, I throughly enjoyed it.
Quotes / Creative Genius
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Poetry / Knight's Code
Nice, good flow, meter and use of rythm. Simplistic and not mencing with it's tone or meaninf, very enjoyable, good work.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The inveterate cynic says…
Nice, I really liked it, bright, sharp with a cutting wit, very well done.
Poetry / Reach
Loved it, the meter, the flow, the imager, the depth and truth found in the piece I loved all of it. Really a wonderful piece of writing, very well done indeed.
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