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AGE: 27
LOC: Indian Trail, NC
GEN: Male
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to whom it may concern: i want to dance with you.. i want our bodies to move in rhythm with one another, and our souls to meld into one.. more than anything, i want to be inside of you. i long for the days that my words finally resonate within, when i’m the first thought you have every morning, and the dream you fall asleep to every night.. i bet the way you move is magical, because.. the way you move in me has been nothing short of magnificient.. i sit back and marvel as you entrance a...
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Version 1
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i need a woman.. i need to be used and ripped apart and taken advantage of.. against my will and everything. i need to be touched and felt and fucked and hurt and scarred and.... loved. it's all the same anyway, right? it could be the drug[s], it could be the alcohol.. but i ache, i want, i burn and DAMN, i'm horny as hell. being single isn't as much fun as i make it out to be.. never having the release that women can provide has been absolutely dreadful as of late.. and sadly, there's no end...
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Version 1
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something about your voice makes me dream of forever.. no matter how improbable that may be. i don't try to fool myself into thinking i could be any sort of good for you.. but i could make you happy, if only for a little while. i think i could make you smile.. brief moments of warm and tender thoughts are often quite fleeting, but with you there are an abundance.. and i thank you.. i think sometimes that what you want, what you wish for, are never generally what you end up with. this.. you.. ...
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Version 1
3 Reviews   4 Comments
i want to watch her bathe, and share a steamy shower after long and exhausting days.. i want to fall asleep to her deep breaths and subtle moans every night. and even though i complain she's too loud and keeping me awake.. secretly.. the truth is.. she only keeps me awake because i can't get her off my mind.. can't tear myself away for even the briefest of moments.. who needs sleep when the girl you've always dreamt of is yours.. when she's lying next to me, i want to fantasize about our next...
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Version 1
16 Reviews   1 Comment
passion drips slowly from the tip of my cock as you examine what you want to do to me and how.. the sound of your voice slips and slides under my skin and every part of me burns excitedly for you.. moans and screams and whispers and sighs escape your lips as they rip and tear their way violently through my mind.. igniting shameful fantasies and a furor that has yet to be unleashed... all i can do is breathe and lose myself in the moment. you twist and tease and tease and tease and i pretend t...
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Non-fiction / six words to tell a tale
Agreed. What a great one-liner!
Short Story / A Bold New Beginning
I enjoyed this, but it seems like there are a lot of adjectives that may not really be needed. Ie, "burly well tanned man with a dirty sweaty face". If they are essential, I think I would at least like to see them separated by a comma. I hope this was of some help.
I love the idea of the song. Habbit (sp.) - habit? The language, to me, seems a bit lofty for the subject of the song, if that makes sense at all. I don't know the genre or tempo you have in mind, so perhaps that would make all the different. Great concept, though.
Lyrics / You
This is all so beautifully written. "When you’re gone the sun don’t shine, and the beauty dies" Could "don't" possibly be replaced with "won't" - to me, this sort of takes something away from the entirety of the piece.
Lyrics / Reveal to me
"Reveal to me The bone in the meat that you say you can not eat" Would it perhaps flow better if the final that was not included in this verse and the ones later?
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